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Our Lady of the Moonlight, First Contact challenge by Kiara Sayre

Apr 17, 2005 18:28

Title: Our Lady of the Moonlight
Author: Kiara Sayre
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Summary: Alavah teaches.
Notes: Thanks to frostfire_12 and zippitgood for beta-ing!

( I am feathered by the moonlight falling down on me )

author: kiarasayre, challenge: first contact

Comments 7

cofax7 April 17 2005, 23:16:49 UTC

Oh, that was simply lovely.

rosewildeirish April 17 2005, 23:36:20 UTC

Nice. And I very much liked that it was Ford & Teyla instead of Sheppard & McKay.

wynn_tilion April 18 2005, 00:25:59 UTC

Wow. That was really very beautiful. I like that it was from Ford's POV - I don't see that as often as I'd like. And interesting that the lack of the gene enabled them to do the fun stuff for a change.

And as much as Alavah is a net, it’s a wheel; birth, life, death, and finally peace, and no matter what happens in between, the ending is the same, and the only true pain in life is a life wasted, a wheel unfinished.

I especially liked this bit. It made me feel maybe a smidgen of the comfort Ford and Teyla were feeling.

minnow1212 April 18 2005, 00:59:41 UTC

Beautiful and a little melancholy. Thank you.

fenris_wolf0 April 18 2005, 03:21:49 UTC

Very good: a truly original concept and Ford and Teyla were the right choice for this experience... beautiful language too!