Ichneumonidae by havocthecat [NC-17] (Amnesty 2006, Body Modification)

Dec 31, 2006 18:44

Title: Ichneumonidae
Author: havocthecat
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Evan Lorne, John Sheppard, Elizabeth Weir
Pairings: Sheppard/Weir, Lorne/Sheppard/Weir
Warnings: Is it noncon if an alien retrovirus made them want to do it?
Challenges: Amnesty 2006, Body Modification
Author's Notes/Summary: Okay, I was chatting with medie, and I brought up a possible Conversion ( Read more... )

challenge: body modification, author: havocthecat, amnesty 2006

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amitee January 1 2007, 01:01:48 UTC
*adds to 'yay threesome' memories*

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havocthecat January 1 2007, 01:04:07 UTC
That would be a good title for a memories section. Hee! :) So glad you like, and thank you again for the beta--I redid most of that last paragraph, and hopefully it works better.

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kimberlite January 1 2007, 01:07:29 UTC
Very cool in a creepy/alien sort of way.

Rodney would do anything for her more soon, and Ronon would be hers too, strong and tall they were all hers. John wrapped his arms around her, his skin rasping against hers as he kissed her again, and they turned toward each other, eyes closing to sleep as Elizabeth's instincts hummed, and she knew deep in her blood what would come. Queen.

I liked the way Elizabeth changed, how she thought/heard as both a human and an insect, and the mating!sex was hot. And the addition of Lorne was great. :)

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havocthecat January 1 2007, 01:30:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the whole thing worked for you, and that the whole duality aspect of it came across clearly.

Plus, y'know, Lorne. Hard to resist that level of hotness.

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bluebanrigh January 1 2007, 02:24:25 UTC
Totally cool. Can't wait to see where this AU goes.

Bug John, Elizabeth and Lorne surprisingly hot.

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havocthecat January 1 2007, 03:02:18 UTC
I've been talking about it with a friend, and we're sort of laying a general outline, and then maybe planning on throwing it open for more writers after we get some of the basic stuff done.

And aren't they oddly compelling? Don't ask me how that happened, but yeah, not complaining.

Thank you so much!

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bluebanrigh January 1 2007, 03:26:19 UTC
Very compelling, mostly so in how their social order will change (or not change), how Elizabeth will see the other females, how the males will treat each other. I've always been interested in how the Wraiths interact with each other and this hopefully will give us insight into a somewhat similiar species.

Also what would happen if/when Earth finds out about this little incident would be intriguing.

And the alien insect sex. *g*

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havocthecat January 2 2007, 01:55:42 UTC
Very compelling, mostly so in how their social order will change (or not change)

Oh, I'm trying to work all of that out right now. Honestly, I'm not sure how the social order will change, because, well, this being science fiction, it makes perfect sense to have both insect and mammal behaviors. So trying to mesh that is...well, interesting.

I have plans for the Wraith, though. If I can come up with something beyond "they do this," since I need some more details.

Also what would happen if/when Earth finds out about this little incident would be intriguing.

Oh, yes. Especially now that we know what Jack's standing orders for Atlantis are!

And the alien insect sex. *g*

Well, that's always just fun, don't you think? ;)

Also, I wanted to say, I was checking out your journal, and that's just an absolutely beautiful layout that you have. How did you come up with the title, and the idea to switch Elizabeth's eyes to the fathomless blue color that they are in your layout?

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havocthecat January 2 2007, 02:00:00 UTC
Thank you! I have such a thing for threesomes, I really do. I'm glad that you like it, and to hear it's your favorite of what you've read so far is very flattering. :) *glees*

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dossier January 1 2007, 03:21:56 UTC
oh, awesomely creepy!

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havocthecat January 2 2007, 02:01:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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