I like 'em both - but altver#2 actually breaks my heart - it's the mark of a loner who is trying so hard to be what is expected of him and failing beautifully which is my image of John to a 'T'.
Glad you liked. *nods* Text is actually the same, but one version might make it harder to read the first part than the other. For once I liked obscuring it to show the double meanings.
Okay, see, I'm stupid, I thought the two pics showing were the only two - I never clicked on the links to see the other two. Having done so now, I curiously enough, still prefer altversion #2, only now it's the real altver#2!
I can't see them. It's just two links, "alternative version 1" and "alternative version 2". If I click on either I get a message about not having permission to access.
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*nods* Text is actually the same, but one version might make it harder to read the first part than the other. For once I liked obscuring it to show the double meanings.
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I'm tempted to do one for enname anyway, either with bear or with inviting blue ocean, to skew the meaning into the other direction a bit.
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