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Insight (Amnesty 2006, First Contact)

Dec 20, 2006 02:07

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amnesty 2006, challenge: first contact, author: halotolerant

Comments 12

McKeyla is love mhalachaiswords December 20 2006, 02:29:27 UTC

Which is just, like, like pi turning out to be a whole number.

It's at this point that I totally understand Rodney in this fic. Also, Rodney's thought patterns in the shape of ordered lists are great. I love this.

mecurtin December 20 2006, 03:11:55 UTC

I endorse this pairing, especially if you keep writing it. All I need is for you to keep persuading me that it could happen.

ladyagnew December 20 2006, 03:34:55 UTC

I love this pairing; probably because I find Rodney reacting to any beautiful woman endlessly amusing, but then you brought the strange common thread of humanity that could link them, and this line: "he’s only just realised that she’s lonely, maybe even more than he is" nailed it for me. Lovely little peek at them; and hope you have much luck in converting more writers to the McTeyla fold. I would so benefit!

spike21 December 20 2006, 06:04:04 UTC

oooh! I like it. Nice flag. *g*

argosy December 20 2006, 07:21:56 UTC

This is lovely. :) The voice is perfect.