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First Night Challenge: We Would Certainly Have Heard by Brighid.

Mar 04, 2005 06:04

Challenge: First Night In Atlantis
Category: Gen
Rating: PG
Author: Brighid
Summary: We always *think* we know. But we don't.

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challenge: first night, author: mz_bstone

Comments 10

history_gurl March 4 2005, 14:56:44 UTC

Okay, that was brilliant. And writing in the second person? I stand in awe of your talent.

And this line ...

And you hate being afraid more than everything else put together.

I can hear the frustration and rage. Thank you.

rosewildeirish March 4 2005, 15:56:23 UTC

Lovely, lovely character study. I hope that's hints of things to come on the show as well.

packmentality March 4 2005, 16:45:25 UTC

Whee Kavanaugh!fic! Great job on the second person perspective, and on giving Kavanaugh a believable internal voice.

mmmchelle March 4 2005, 17:56:52 UTC

I like this. It gives Kavanaugh some depth instead of leaving him just the token asshole.

I especially liked the part about heroes and Kavanaugh not believing in them.

Ooh! anonymous March 4 2005, 19:43:37 UTC

I loved this. because Kavanaugh in 38 Minutes? Was Rodney in Lockdown. The outsider telling an ugly truth.