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[lady_lirenel]

Title: Black Widow
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[lady_lirenel]

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[jargonelle]

This might be an odd thing to say first, but I really liked the use of John in this, and it was an interesting take on the challenge. I love this kind of idea and it was very enjoyable to read, thank you.

And I think you typed 'frown' instead of 'brown' in the last paragraph.

[lady_lirenel]

I'm so glad you liked John's part I was hesitant to add him in. And thank you for the frown/brown mention, I fixed it. Thanks for commenting!

[emeraldteal]

I like how you've describe Elizabeth and John's relationship. Those three have their lives intertwined, so I loved stories where they're all featured.

I'm glad Rodney was brave enough to love Elizabeth, and that the curse was finally broken. John and Elizabeth will take care of each other and the baby after Rodney's gone, right?

Sad, but has a hopeful ending. Thanks for sharing! :)

[lady_lirenel]

Yup, John will help Elizabeth, though they probably won't end up in a relationship other than friendship. (the curse may have ended with the baby, but Elizabeth still suffers the effects)

Glad you liked the story!

[jen_chan13]

wow! i have to say, i almost didn't read this because of the pairing (i ship elsewhere.... *shame*) but i did read it, and it's good!! i've never read much elizabeth fic, but i really liked her in this. *surprised* so, yay. ^__^

[lady_lirenel]

I'm glad you liked it! yah, I'm also to blame for not reading fics witih certain pairings, so no worries.