Super - by with_apostrophe (Secret Superpower Challenge)

[with_apostrophe]

Title: Super
Author: with_apostrophe
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1400
Spoilers: Various episodes up to and including 'The Siege 3'

Summary: The evolution of Super Ford

Comments (especially concrit) would be appreciated as I'm brand new to posting SGA fic.

Aiden Ford had always considered himself to be average. At school there was no doubt that he was smart

Comments

[sor_bet]

Man, I just feel so sorry for Ford. You've done a really good job with his backstory, so we understand why he's so loath to give up the enzyme, even if it weren't messing with his head. And now I feel even more sorry for him. Nicely done.

(I don't have cable and have seen only through Season 3, so if he showed up in season 4, don't tell me! :-D)

[hajimebassaidai]

Poor Ford, he always tried so hard, expected himself to be one of a handful of officers yet found himself 2IC against a brand new enemy.

A feeling of always having to try and be the best would help explain his desperation to cling to his new "abilities".