Control by bluetoads Exhaustion Challenge

[bluetoads]

Title: Control
Author: bluetoads
Length: 1,974 words
Pairing: John/ Steve (sort of )
Rating: PG-13 ( swear word and mild sexual tension.)
Spoilers: If you look hard referances up to Condemmed season 2. Takes place during season 1.
Don't own SGA etc

Warning: Something I have been playing with for a couple of weeks after reading a couple of the transcripts

Comments

[emeraldsword]

I really like this, partly the way that Steve reacts to the soldiers and partly the way that the soldiers react to John. This is very interesting, well done.

[bluetoads]

Thank you, Those were two of the things I was trying for but wasn't sure if they came through.

[ceitie]

Very cool, nice POV with Steve. One spelling problem: though, not thou.

[bluetoads]

Thank you, so much for spell check. My beta missed them all to. I think I fixed them all.

[lilyoftheval5]

Thou is an old form, but still perfectly acceptable.
Nice story, I can picture John doing something like that.

[megsjedi]

The darker moods expressed here are excellent. I never thought of trying an SGA fic from Steve's POV. Genius.

[bluetoads]

Thank you! (I'm not a genius though-I have been told there are a couple of Steve fics out there already.)

[aislingde]

I never thougt that it would be possible to write Steves POV. But you make ist in a rather perfect way. It is fantastic.

[bluetoads]

Thank you!

[bluetoads]

Thank you! Sorry, should have thanked you days ago. Got side tracked and forgot to go back and thank everyone for the nice comments.