Personal Hero by MrsHamill, Exhaustion challenge

[mrshamill]

Personal Hero

Comments

[dracostella]

Go Rodney! So sweet and brave...

though the marshmallow over steel thingy made me pause...

And poor John...

And woot Teyla/Elizabeth!

[mrshamill]

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And Rodney is SO much that description (at least in my head!).

[celli]

Mmm, that was one seriously awesome kiss.

[mrshamill]

Thanks! I've had people tell me that kisses can almost be better than the real thing... though I'm not sure! ;-)

[tesserae_]

Aww, I *like* Rodney all brave and determined! You did a great job of capturing the awful exhaustion of walking through sand and staying awake for far too long as well...

[mrshamill]

Thank you! Rodney may always bitch about it, but when it has to be done he always comes through. I'm glad you liked it.

[ceitie]

Yay for action and hurt!John and Rodney being the hero we know he is, whinging the whole way and caring so hard it hurts. Also, the Dark Ones were actually really damn scary, way more so than the Wraith.

[mrshamill]

Thanks! Believe me, it was hard as hell coming up with an enemy who was scarier than the Wraith, I'm glad they came across so well. I'm glad it worked.

[lishel_fracrium]

Oh God! I love this and the plot you made...wow oh God and the kiss I'm a sucker for good kisses wow. *puts in memories* thank you!

[mrshamill]

I'm glad you liked it! I was afraid it was too little plot, but I'm glad it worked. Thanks!