About Ten Days Before The Wraith Attack by Icarus (Virgin Challenge)

[icarusancalion]

Title: About Ten Days Before The Wraith Attack
Author: Icarus
Website: Icarus Slash Fiction
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Challenge: Virgin Challenge
Summary: It was John's idea, and predictably, Rodney freaked out.
Notes: Thank you to electricandroid for the beta. One of two fics inspired by the same line.

Comments

[justalurkr]

Very thoroughly distracted...looks like you have some repair work on your cut-tag to do.

[icarusancalion]

Man... and my system suddenly bogged down and then LJ wouldn't let me log back in. *sighs* Fixed. Finally.

Icarus

[justalurkr]

LJ is just a contrary little beast, sometimes.

Good story, though.

[icarusancalion]

Always so embarrassing when I mess up the tags and know there's a hundred people out their checking their f-lists and swearing at the idiot.

Good story, though.

Thank you!

Icarus

[20thcenturyvole]

That was really cool, kind of hot and weirdly sweet. I love the strangeness you put across after the siege is over - such a great illustration of how unexpected it must have been to survive that.

Awesome!

[icarusancalion]

I love the strangeness you put across after the siege is over - such a great illustration of how unexpected it must have been to survive that.

I have two stories spun off the same line and that strangeness of after-the-siege is one of the biggest differences between them. Thank you.

Icarus

[overchay]

Thiiiis was pretty awesome. I loved this: "In Rodney's room, John hovered in the doorway and asked, "Do you mind if I just sleep?" At Rodney's nod he tucked himself around Rodney's back, arm draped over Rodney's waist, and slept like a log for the first time since they'd conquered the Wraith." so very, very much.

And, of course, this: ""I want to fuck your tight ass," John had growled into the back of Rodney's neck and he felt Rodney relax, his fingers sliding into him easily." because, um, HELLO incredible imagery.

Like I said, thiiiis was pretty damn awesome.

[icarusancalion]

Thiiiis was pretty awesome. I loved this: "In Rodney's room, John hovered in the doorway and asked, "Do you mind if I just sleep?" At Rodney's nod he tucked himself around Rodney's back, arm draped over Rodney's waist, and slept like a log for the first time since they'd conquered the Wraith." so very, very much.

Oh cool. You know how you always wonder about this or that line in a fic? That was my "I'm not sure about this line." So glad it worked.

Icarus

[overchay]

I just loved it. The whole sexual relationship a non-relationship, to John just wanting to sleep with Rodney? Normally I'm not a fan of John, or stories that follow John's POV more closely, but the end really worked for me. I liked this a lot! ;D

[torakowalski]

Oh lovely, really nice. Especially the last line.

[icarusancalion]

Oh thank you. That last line's a bit of a puzzle palace because it's weird that they felt safe about their relationship with doom heading their way.

Icarus

[bluebrocade]

Nice. Great job!

[icarusancalion]

Thank you!

Icarus