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Hot As Hell, by Maribou (NC-17)

Mar 24, 2006 20:51

Title: Hot As Hell
Author: Maribou
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: ~1300
Summary: A shocking confession leads to a blasphemous John and a very red-faced Rodney.
Warning: Particularly perverse and entirely lacking in plot!

( His eyes narrowed wickedly and a slow, dirty smile spread across his face. 'Prove it.' )

author: maribouquet, challenge: 7ds

Comments 30

not_sally March 25 2006, 07:54:44 UTC

^______^

cute.

maribouquet March 25 2006, 16:44:03 UTC

Thank you, thank you! I feel especially flattered and proud that I manged to make EVIL PORN also kinda cute for you.

not_sally March 25 2006, 17:53:34 UTC

I know! I was going to go with one of the usual "guh, dead from teh Hot" comments, but it was rather sweet in spite of the sizzling hotness.

spike21 March 25 2006, 08:59:30 UTC

that, was awesome!

maribouquet March 25 2006, 16:40:52 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked.

torakowalski March 25 2006, 18:23:31 UTC

Mmm. Hot. So hot. Yet I'm clearly insane cos despite all the amazing hotness, my favourite line was this one, which is just beautifully cute:

"I think," John whispered as he dropped a kiss on the tip of Rodney's flushed nose, "that you are disgusting and beautiful and mine."

maribouquet March 26 2006, 02:09:45 UTC

I'm insane, too. And very happy that you liked this and let me know it. Thanks!

HAH! krysalys March 25 2006, 22:43:11 UTC

Oh hell, that's so fucking sexy!
Hee, poor Rodney's back. Aw hell, like he even felt it twinging, hrm? Hee. bet being with John's made him a whole helluva lot more limber anyway.
*drools copiously*
This was so dirty and wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing!
----}-@

Re: HAH! maribouquet March 26 2006, 02:11:44 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked, and wow! I made someone drool. That's a first, I think. :)

crownglass39 March 26 2006, 02:21:21 UTC

I love everything about this!
Yes, Rodney is probably intelligent enough that he would figure out a way to make himself flexible enough to suck his own cock.

John, is probably kinky enough to get off on that.

I LOVE the last four lines of this! Just perfect.

maribouquet March 26 2006, 02:26:53 UTC

I too think that John has a kinky side. It goes so well with his wristbands. :)

Also, I'm very glad to hear your opinion on the ending. I wondered if it worked or not, and I'm happy to know that someone other than me likes it, too.

Thanks for the feedback!