Comments | sga_flashfic: Interface by Resonant (amnesty/ESP), part 1 of 3

resonant8 in sga_flashfic

Interface by Resonant (amnesty/ESP), part 1 of 3

Jan 16, 2006 23:41

Sliding in under the wire with one last story ...

Interface
part 1 of 3
by Resonant
for the ESP challenge
McKay/Sheppard, R, 790 words
The inside of McKay's brain was worse than TV news.

Beta thanks to astolat and cesperanza.

( Interface 1 )

author: resonant, challenge: esp, amnesty ii

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resonant8 January 18 2006, 03:13:24 UTC

Well, naturally I take a strong interest in everyone's fantasies.

ceitie January 17 2006, 22:04:40 UTC

Ooh, can't wait to read the rest now...

resonant8 January 18 2006, 03:13:52 UTC

Thanks!

diluvian January 18 2006, 21:52:03 UTC

Jesus, his voice was deeper and less nasal than that in real life, surely.

Hah!

And the rest of it? Guh!

resonant8 January 19 2006, 03:47:40 UTC

Thanks!

out_there January 19 2006, 05:25:06 UTC

McKay knew exactly what he was doing. He wasn't just hammering in there. He was good, moving smooth and slow with a little pause at the deepest point, god, not just like somebody who'd done this before, but like somebody who'd done this before to John. And McKay's neck was bent forward, his whole body curled tenderly, protectively around John, and he was murmuring something too low to hear in a gritty, breathless voice, something soft and amazed and --

Humina. *breathes* Whoa.

resonant8 January 20 2006, 03:05:14 UTC

Hee! Glad you liked it.

like_the_drink January 19 2006, 22:40:21 UTC

Wow, this was really great. I initially thought they were in there together, like in Duet, but this is even cooler.

resonant8 January 20 2006, 03:05:52 UTC

Oh, interesting idea! But glad you liked this version, too.