What to Say to Rodney When He's Naked; Or, How Aliens MadeThem (Almost) Do It, by mousewitchy

[mousewitchy]

Title: What to Say to Rodney When He’s Naked;
Or, How Aliens Made Them (Almost) Do It
Author: mousewitchy
Rated: Hard R/ Soft NC-17
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Disclaimer: Not mine. Fan-written fiction.
Summary: Wherein Teyla gets slave-boys, Rodney gets naked, and John’s hair sends secret signals.
A/N: I have loads of people to thank on this, namely: _evening_star_

Comments

[hotspur18]

Whee! *is otherwise speechless*

(I lied. I loved this so, so much. And there was snark, as well!)

*is da happy*

Thanks for this

:-) xx

[mousewitchy]

*flails*

Thank you! That is so nice!

*dances*

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting!

[mcalex22]

The sex was very hot, but I love how you did the "Aliens made us do it theme"... in a more tender way, if those are the right words? What I mean to say is that I liked the way you dealt with the emotional side of it and the consideration you showed both John and Rodney.

I'd actually like to see Teyla as a dominatrix, LOL, because sometimes, I do reckon that she puts up with so much from these boys!

Great story :D

[mousewitchy]

The sex was very hot, but I love how you did the "Aliens made us do it theme"... in a more tender way, if those are the right words? What I mean to say is that I liked the way you dealt with the emotional side of it and the consideration you showed both John and Rodney.

Now that is a compliment. *beams* Thank you very much, I'm flattered.

I do try very hard to show respect for my characters when I write, even (or especially, I should say) the ones who are sometimes very deeply flawed. Now, I would consider either John or Rodney "very deeply flawed", but I'm glad that it came through anyway.

Thank you again, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[torakowalski]

Aww, this is greatness.

Very, very funny and then brain-meltingly hot at the end.

And I love this line: it was amazing, really, how nervous a smirking fighter pilot made some folks

*g*

[mousewitchy]

Eeeee! Thank you so much.

I especially loved that line as well. I was *raised* by a fighter pilot, so I know what occasional unsufferable folks they make of themselves. There's an old joke that goes like this:

Q:What's the difference between a cactus and an F-16?

A: The cactus keeps its pricks on the outside.

Type-A personalities, all of them, just like Landry says in SG-1. *g*

Again, I'm glad you liked this, and thanks for commenting!

[mmmchelle]

I really liked this. Loved John's thoughts about smirking and flying and aviator sunglasses. And him telling Rodney that he wanted to blow him was hot, really hot, scorchingly hot.

In fact, I think I need a drink.

[mousewitchy]

Wheeeeeeeee! *dances and flails*

I'm glad you liked this! Like I told danvers and grrrl, as awesome as it is to get feedback at all, I think it's doubly so to get it from my favorite authors.

And hot? From you? Like the ultimate compliment.

*passes you a drink*

Thanks!

[mmmchelle]

::takes drink::

Thank you.

And now I'm the one who is complimented.

feedback

[suzy_queue]

Absolutely gorgeous and a great idea, about the matriarchal society. Makes perfect sense, really. Excellent story.

Re: feedback

[mousewitchy]

Oh, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

*beams*