Overheard by Lysora [First Night Challenge]

[lysora]

Title: Overheard
Author: Lysora
Rating: Gen, Weir
Challenge: First Night (Amnesty)
Word Count: ~930
Summary: Elizabeth checks in with everyone on their first night.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: Unbetaed.

Comments

[torakowalski]

I like this very much.

It's a lovely character study for Elizabeth (and you've painted her beautifully and highlighted so many little things I'd never have thought of) and with so few words you say so much about the other people she encounters on her rounds.

Very nice *g*

[lysora]

Thank you! It was more of an exercise for me to see if I could get her voice right, so I wasn't sure how well it turned out. Glad it worked for you :)

[lysora]

It's beautiful, isn't it? I wish I could just cut that clip and stick it right into the fic because my words don't do it justice at all.

[roothekittykat]

that was beautiful

[lysora]

thank you :)