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The Care and Feeding of a CO by Domenika Marzione [amnesty/City Exploration Challenge]

Jan 01, 2006 01:21

The Care and Feeding of a CO
Genfic John/Atlantis
7800 words
Post-Conversion, Pre-Aurora; almost everyone here appeared in The Jenny Code first, but this comes before that.

smittywing suffered for this. But I fed her and sheltered her, so...

( Everyone knew who Atlantis was really happy to see. )

challenge: city exploration, amnesty ii, author: domenika_marzione

Comments 117

bramble_rose January 1 2006, 06:48:46 UTC

Ohhh *shivers* This fic totally feeds my AtlantislovesJohn kink. Thank you so much for that, and happy New Year.

miss_porcupine January 1 2006, 15:33:46 UTC

Thank you and a good new year to you and yours.

ixchel55 January 1 2006, 07:08:28 UTC

I really enjoyed this. No angst, no UST, just a lovely rapport between Lorne and Sheppard and an even lovelier rapport between Sheppard and Atlantis.

I loved the little jaunt through Atlantis, the way it responded to Sheppard's presence, and the banter between all the men.

Everyone was very much in character (even Atlantis *g*), and even though there were no 'big' moments in this fic, it never bogged down or made me want to skip ahead.

Very well done.

You know, the one thing I haven't read in any fic (although I might just have missed it) was how Atlantis might have changed her rapport with Sheppard when his DNA was being altered in 'Conversion'. Since he was more Wraith-like than 'Ancient' it must have confused the city to at least some extent.

Hmmm, must give this some thought and drop a few hints in appropriate ears.

miss_porcupine January 1 2006, 15:37:22 UTC

Ha! There's a thought for a story...

Thanks. I was of mixed opinion about writing an essentially plotless story, but I'm glad it worked.

raisintorte January 1 2006, 07:22:38 UTC

Yay!! More Yoni. I love the way you write Lorne. And Sheppard/Atlantis is one of my few OTPs.

A wonderful read. :-)

miss_porcupine January 1 2006, 15:51:30 UTC

The first time Yoni Safir gets a speaking part in one of my stories. I'm glad you enjoyed.

svmadelyn January 1 2006, 07:38:31 UTC

*giggles* She *does* like you John. I loved the rapport between Lorne and Sheppard in here--it was all adorable and comforting and just--really lovely.

miss_porcupine January 1 2006, 15:53:03 UTC

Lorne's shrewd and adaptable, John's largely oblivious... it's a command structure made in heaven. :)

Thanks.

cofax7 January 1 2006, 07:58:40 UTC

I really like your OCs and the technical details you put into your stories. And lots of great little banter, like the bit with the small-size sweatpants. Heeee!

Good stuff!

miss_porcupine January 1 2006, 15:54:39 UTC

What boys say when we're not around. I'm glad you enjoyed.