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Predator, by Ellex

Dec 15, 2005 12:48

Title: Predator
Sequel to Open Blade by magus_minor
Author: ellex42Challenge: Shark ( Read more... )

Comments 55

toniabarone December 15 2005, 19:26:14 UTC

Oh damn. Damn. Freck. Damn. Hot. Dear lords was this hot. Damn. Fuck. Such a wonderful continuation. Wow. Loved this. Damn. And I can SO see Rodney hunched over a computer looking up everything he can on it. Wow. And the homemade gear. Wow. Damn. freck. Thank you so much for this.

ellex42 December 15 2005, 19:39:45 UTC

You're very welcome. Believe me, trying to figure out what Rodney might find 'on hand' was not easy. No strip malls with adult stores in the Pegasus Galaxy, and I don't think Caldwell would be very accomodating about filling personal orders like that on his next round trip.

Unless he was going to use them himself.

Not so much Rodney hunched over the computer, as me. I totally don't get the pain for pleasure thing at all.

toniabarone December 15 2005, 19:47:43 UTC

Neither do I, but you sure as hell did a good job at faking it. Bravo.

ellex42 December 15 2005, 20:20:25 UTC

I owe it to authors like CaroleROI and Alexis Rogers in The Sentinel fandom who clearly did much more research than I did. And managed to get the concept across in their stories in a way that I could, intellectually at least, understand.

betagoddess December 15 2005, 19:52:35 UTC

Wow! Just LOVED that! My biggest kink is BDSM with Rodney topping John!

Thanks so much for this. =>}

ellex42 December 15 2005, 20:09:27 UTC

LOL, happy to feed your kink.

I usually see Rodney as a top - I think he has control issues.

betagoddess December 15 2005, 20:56:09 UTC

Ooo! Cool! Then I hope to see more from you soon! =>}

magus_minor December 15 2005, 20:16:35 UTC

No, seriously. You totally had me with this. It's exciting, John saying he's not gay, and the gay isn't even the issue. The mirror, and the switch - *is puddle of goo*

I'm glad you wrote this, and you can blame me anytime, dear.

ellex42 December 15 2005, 20:23:42 UTC

Ooh, I was very proud of myself for coming up with the mirror.

Thanks again! I look forward to seeing what else you write.

magus_minor December 16 2005, 05:43:44 UTC

You have reason to be. That was brilliant.

LOL! The Hasenstall is ever growing and gnawing at their restraints. Who knows, it could be anything. But I do believe there will be the occasional offering. ::g::

sweeneybird December 15 2005, 20:29:22 UTC

I don't think I like this series but it's vivid, compelling, and I can't stop reading it. Which is my bass-ackwards way of saying that you're an excellent writer.

ellex42 December 15 2005, 20:38:32 UTC

Thank you so much!

Nice icon, BTW.

shendara December 15 2005, 20:33:59 UTC

I don't like relationships like that. That said I must admit that I really want to read another story in this universe. You hit a kink I didn't really know I had and well... now I want the next time with the safeword. I'm curious about Johns limits - or if he even has them. (And Rodney topping John is always good in my book.)

Ahem, yes, this is a compliment. A big one from me. *g*

ellex42 December 15 2005, 20:45:45 UTC

BDSM isn't my personal cup of tea, but it's intriguing to try to understand why someone would need/want this kind of thing. Also, I love happy endings...this is kind of my twisted version of one.

I think this John has a problem with limits, at least in the short term. Good thing he has Rodney, huh?

I'm really not certain I could write the next session. I've read that kind of thing, and even enjoyed reading it, but this...well, hits my limits. For now, at least.

Thanks!