Four And A Half Minutes, by The Moonmoth [School Challenge]

[the_moonmoth]

Blame: Helenish planted the seed for this with her post a few weeks ago asking why there weren’t more humorous Teyla/Rodney stories out there. Being one of about three people to write this pairing, I naturally took that as a challenge.
Credit: huge thanks to Alyse, who beta'd despite feeling crappy *bear hugs*
Warnings: The author would like it noted in the

Comments

[grey_bard]

...Awwwww! I have a soft spot for Teyla/Rodney, and I must say that this helped me put a finger on why, exactly, they're so wonderful together! You really capture them wonderfully and get a very believable feel for what they'd be like together/

[the_moonmoth]

Hee! Thanks :) I'm glad it was believable to you.

[eliade]

This is beautiful--this is my Top Not Really That Secret favorite het pairing and I'm all giddy with delight! :) You've made my day a much happier day. I love the interactions here--Rodney's inept puppy-love motivations and Teyla's ability to get beyond the surface and be happy with him. And it's romantic! And there is a scary mention of tiny children! Hee. *g* I'm really glad you wrote this--and that helenish person rightly has all kinds of stuff to answer for.

[the_moonmoth]

Aww, thanks. I'm very happy to have spread the happies... or something *g* And yeah, scary is the word when it comes to McKay and children.

[teaphile]

Oh my god, what perfectly Rodney things to do, all of them. And Teyla's patience and humour came out well. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

[the_moonmoth]

Yay! I'm very glad :) Thank you.

[fenris_wolf0]

Hee hee hee... this was great! Please write more (especially McKay/Teyla, they are so fun and would fit so well together).

:D

[the_moonmoth]

I'm glad you enjoyed it *g* As for writing more... not while sober, I think ;)

[the_moonmoth]

Thank you :-D I really enjoyed writing this so I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it.