Fic: 'In Passing' by Kellifer_k (School Challenge)

[kellifer_k]

Squeaking in...

Fic 'In Passing'
Author: kellifer_k
Webpage: Here
Pairing: Shep/McKay
Rating: Mild (Adult themes... ish)
Notes: School challenge
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue!

Summary: Rodney stared openly as John turned back in his direction, leaned out a long, tanned arm and snagged some of Rodney’s fries. He dropped them into his mouth when he

Comments

[tingler]

Really liked this. Can just *see* it, y'know? And the part about John following Rodney up to his room and pressing him up against the door and...yeah. That was...yeah.

But oh, when he went away!! Poor Rodney!!! (And I imagine John wasn't all that thrilled about it, either.)

[kellifer_k]

But we all knows they meet again.... *grins*

[nakedwesley]

My only complaint: this was too short! I liked how John so casually included Rodney in his life. Very sweet. How sad that it only lasted 4 weeks. Love the ending!

[kellifer_k]

Thankyou!!

[amothea]

I really liked this. :)

[kellifer_k]

Thanks! *beams*

[somnio_enormis]

Ooo. A realistic "when they were young" fic...I love it!

Really, it's hard to find fics that keep characterization like this. Good job!

Gold star! ---> * !

[kellifer_k]

Heheee... thanks!

*slaps gold star on forehead*

[ficklememeer]

The ending just made my heart melt and I let out a very audible, "Ohhhhhhhhhhh!" Well done!

[kellifer_k]

Sankyou!