The Hostage Major, Part Two--by Frostfire

Sep 14, 2005 22:11

When Rodney showed up the next day, he had a laptop and a briefcase full of papers with him. John watched, bemused, as he set everything up on the dressing table. “What are you doing?”

“Working. I can’t get anything done in the lab, it’s full of ( Read more... )

challenge: harlequin, author: frostfire

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pingin_tango September 15 2005, 05:49:23 UTC
This was good. I loved your Rodney. *g*

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frostfire_17 September 15 2005, 22:27:16 UTC
Thanks! I love my Rodney, too...*gives Rodney biiig hug*

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shoe_buckle September 15 2005, 05:50:04 UTC
Quickly, two lines that just cracked me up:

So John figured that, in reverse order, they were the room in which Rodney lived, worked, and laughed smugly at all the people who had less money than he did.

and

let in through the security gate and the other security gate and searched for weapons and oranges

Very, very amusing.

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frostfire_17 September 15 2005, 22:29:03 UTC
Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it! (Rodney would SO laugh smugly. You know he would.)

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seperis September 15 2005, 05:53:00 UTC
*yes* What a fabulous take on Harlequin. Just *fantastic*. I loved them both in this--very IC for teh storyline, adn it worked for me.

That was *fun*.

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frostfire_17 September 15 2005, 22:30:26 UTC
Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed it! And, yeah. The storyline kind of ate my brain. Harlequin meets Atlantis--they breed like rabbits. Details at eleven.

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custardpringle September 15 2005, 05:53:05 UTC
I have a calculus exam in six hours.

I am going to fail.

And it is ALL YOUR FAULT because you write such amazing porn and it's permanently rotted my brain.

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frostfire_17 September 15 2005, 22:32:07 UTC
I'm....sorry?

*sends you good math vibes, although I'm guessing the exam is done by now* And come on! There's math in the *story*! Prime numbers! Wormhole physics!

Hope your test went well, very glad you enjoyed the story. :)

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custardpringle September 16 2005, 02:23:30 UTC
I survived my exam :D no thanks to you, though.

although I appreciate your concern.

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frostfire_17 September 15 2005, 22:35:43 UTC
Heh. There's this great website that has the first 10,000 primes listed in order. I've used it for a couple stories, now. (Believe me. I would NEVER guess on prime/not prime. All I can do is the easy ones, like if the number has digits that add up to a multiple of 3.)

Glad you liked it so much...thanks for reading it! (all! fifteen! thousand! words! aah!) ^_^

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