AS, by Frostfire

Aug 04, 2005 14:23

Day 1 AS, Rodney runs into John at lunch. He’s struck by a sudden full-body sensory flashback of John’s naked body arching under his, and he can't think of a single thing to say.

From the looks of things, John’s in the same position. The ( Read more... )

author: frostfire, challenge: skirt

Leave a comment

Comments 91

panisdead August 4 2005, 22:04:34 UTC
This is a riot, and the little flashbacks are somehow hotter than actually writing the sex scene would have been. Cool!

Reply

frostfire_17 August 5 2005, 01:29:35 UTC
the little flashbacks are somehow hotter than actually writing the sex scene would have been

*steeples fingers* Tantalizing. To tantalize is key. *grin*

Glad you liked it!

Reply


aphedas August 4 2005, 22:10:26 UTC
Ah, warm fuzzies - I had a grin on my face throughout that - nicely done. :)

And, yup, communicating just fine.

Reply

frostfire_17 August 5 2005, 01:30:41 UTC
Honestly, what else do they need to communicate? I mean, really: "Let's have sex." "Okay." is the only vocabulary *I* see a need to give them. *grin*

Glad you liked it!

Reply


cimness August 4 2005, 22:13:31 UTC
that was really entertaining and nicely fast-paced and flowy. great comic timing and some great dialogue, too.

Reply

frostfire_17 August 5 2005, 01:33:39 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it so much!

Reply


fairestcat August 4 2005, 22:16:24 UTC
oh lovely, especially the whole "maybe we should communicate more" conversation at the end. They are SUCH guys.

Reply

frostfire_17 August 5 2005, 01:37:57 UTC
Oh, yes they are. Funnily enough, the summary only came to me at the absolute last second, as I was posting. But it FITS.

Glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting!

Reply


isiscolo August 4 2005, 22:19:44 UTC
Great, fast and funny. The bit about Radek's special psychic powers, hee!

Reply

frostfire_17 August 5 2005, 01:39:17 UTC
He so has them. I swear.

Glad you liked it!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up