First Post!

[20thcenturyvole]

*waves tentatively* Hello! My first post on this community, and my first SGA fic. I’m somewhat worried about how it turned out, but this bunny, she bit hard.

Author: 20thCenturyVole

Rating: PG (for naughty language)

Genre: Gen

Beta: none. Don’t go blaming other people, now!

Challenge: ESP/telepathy

Summary: Atlantis was grateful to him.

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Comments

[minnow1212]

Oh, nice. The creep factor built up slowly.

>It worried, in a bewildered, sleepy way, like a waking leviathan that was still too groggy to know quite what the hell was going on<

Very cool.

[3jane]

Most excellent.

[miera_c]

yikes.
that was creepy. In a good way, of course. :)

[theseashore]

Lovely!

[canadian_snoopy]

The creepiness kind of sneaks up on you, doesn't it? Because John is so... earnest in the beginning, so *normal* and he keeps staying normal right up until you read that last line and you realize you're being led down the garden path.

Hmmmm, very shivery and lovely, thanks for sharing!