Dangling challenge - Anchor by Barkeep

Jun 10, 2005 16:51

Title: Anchor
Author: Barkeep
Rating: PG
Summary: “You’re not going to throw up on me again, are you? Because I can assure you, it’s not as much fun as you might assume.”
Notes: Thanks to mgbutterfly for all the suggestions and letting me talk her to death with this one and, as always, the magnificent sweeneybird without whom there is no beta.

Anchors )

author: barkeep, challenge: dangling

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sweeneybird June 11 2005, 03:39:44 UTC
I like this incarnation even better - you made some more changes, you sly trickster. Nicely done, especially with the the insight about why John lets himself need Rodney.

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barkeep June 13 2005, 02:26:30 UTC
Thanks, sweetie, but I really owe everything to your beta.
As usual. :-)

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fenris_wolf0 June 11 2005, 08:03:42 UTC
This was a great look at their friendship: I liked all the subtle touches a lot... :)

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barkeep June 13 2005, 02:27:24 UTC
Thanks! I tried to go for subtle and sweet - quite a difficult departure for me. :^)

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pionie June 11 2005, 11:02:11 UTC
Aw very sweet. I like someone having something as prosaic as an ear infection in Atlantis :-)

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barkeep June 13 2005, 02:29:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the boring ear infection angle worked for you. Sometimes I like exploring the mundane things in an otherwise fantastic setting.

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mamoru22 June 11 2005, 11:05:12 UTC
Hee, I liked that.

Rodney makes for such a good anchor. :)

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barkeep June 13 2005, 02:31:14 UTC
Thanks!
He *is* a good anchor, isn't he? Glad you liked it. :)

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very nice :) direaliete June 11 2005, 11:14:38 UTC
I love it when John's confused -- thank God Rodney's there for him ;)
Also, very realistic depiction of the symptoms :)

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Re: very nice :) barkeep June 13 2005, 02:32:41 UTC
I'm glad you think the symptom depiction is realistic and that you enjoyed the story.
Thanks!

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