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Dangling Challenge: The Empty Bell by Brighid

Jun 08, 2005 18:24

Challenge: Dangling
Title: The Empty Bell
Rating: Fully Adult
Author: Brighid
Summary: There will be only silence
Pairing:McKay/Sheppard (but the pairing isn't the point, you see)
Note: For some reason had Shell in mind when I wrote this.

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challenge: dangling, author: mz_bstone

Comments 51

sarren June 9 2005, 01:39:38 UTC

Ow. Ow. Ow.

Also, wow. Very intense.

terrie01 June 9 2005, 01:51:50 UTC

Nice. You''re right, the pairing isn't the point. One typo, though:

"Here." John thrust a bottle is hands

mz_bstone June 9 2005, 02:05:25 UTC

something got sliced off editing something else out ... thanks.

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bluster June 9 2005, 01:52:57 UTC

That just about broke my heart. Beautifully done.

theseashore June 9 2005, 01:55:49 UTC

You write so beautifully. So original and so lyrical.

z_rayne June 9 2005, 01:57:42 UTC

Wow, that was so stark and real and just gorgeous. And yeah, the pairing isn't the point (except in the way that it's kind of the only point, if that makes sense, too).