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firedew1 in sga_beya

fanfiction episode challenge 100 words or more

Apr 24, 2013 22:15

Category: Fic
Title: The Devil's Dance
Author: firedew1Rating: T (to be safe ( Read more... )

user: firedew1, s2e8, fanfic, 100 word challenge

Comments 8

ninja007 April 25 2013, 05:44:35 UTC

Loved this!

Very well written. Erotic as hell!

Bravo!

firedew1 April 25 2013, 21:30:23 UTC

Aw! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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jeyla4ever April 26 2013, 01:08:36 UTC

Oh, that is definitely a missing scene! I always wondered what John would do if Teyla had not shot him. I never believed that he would have attacked her because then that's what he would have done from the very beginning like he did to the others. Nope, this sounds so much better. :)

firedew1 April 26 2013, 02:37:55 UTC

Yeah, walking down those stairs, John didn't have that 'I'm going to kill you' look. It was definitely something else. :D

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firedew1 April 28 2013, 22:57:09 UTC

LOL We'll see how it goes, I guess. Finding inspiration is kind of a "by the seat of your pants" thing sometimes, isn't it?

And I'm delighted you liked it. Any compliment from you is certainly high praise in my book. Thanks so much, hon!

kickstand75 April 29 2013, 17:26:19 UTC

The "woowoo" factor in this little ficlet is pretty high, Firedew! :) Great job on this one.

firedew1 April 29 2013, 18:01:40 UTC

LOL That sounds like a good thing, so ... thanks! Glad I could oblige!