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Valentine Challenge: Hearts That Beat As One Day 14

Feb 14, 2012 21:21

Category: Fan Fic
Title: Dance
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user: pdelae, fanfic, challenge: hearts that beat as one

Comments 16

jeyla4ever February 15 2012, 05:07:30 UTC

Oh no you don't. This cannot end like this. So many questions, possibilities and so much more to hope for.

LOVE IT!

pdelae February 16 2012, 04:19:08 UTC

Glad you liked it. Maybe someday a sequel...

ssagey February 15 2012, 08:10:46 UTC

wow...love the idea..and them finding their way to each other like this..just beautiful...and how well they understand each other..oh yeah they are soulmates.
love how john tried so very hard to put up those walls as soon as he realized what had happened...and love how teyla gave comfort and support and how they both just blended so well into each others minds...
and johns reaction o the backless dress...too adorable....
wonderful story as usual and looking forward to more of this or just another story...
very many hugs

pdelae February 16 2012, 04:19:49 UTC

Thanks, Sagey... they really are soulmates.

gaffsie February 15 2012, 08:57:09 UTC

Cute!

pdelae February 16 2012, 04:19:57 UTC

Thanks! :)

kariesue February 15 2012, 16:37:48 UTC

I am so in love with this concept! And the walls going up immediately in John's mind was exactly what he would have done.
The man does have a fear of anyone actually thinking he has feelings.
So glad he was able to sense Teyla's emotions as well and I love how she invited him in to her thoughts.
His reaction to her backless dress was priceless!
And it was great how they gradually became aware of what the other was thinking and feeling.
And I will Beta for you anytime, I don't actually have to do anything.
But I do still have the original and so whenever I need a laugh I can go read that one slip.
It still makes me laugh out loud but your little secret is safe with me.

pdelae February 16 2012, 04:21:10 UTC

Aw, geez... you really have something on me. I can see you using this as blackmail in the future.

Thanks for all the wonderful support, K. You're the best.

nacinom February 15 2012, 17:36:18 UTC

Great concept and wonderful story. I totally agree with jeyla4ever that you should really write a sequel. The possibilities for their relationship with or without the rings are huge. Will they still be okay without them? And most importantly, will they be able to borrow them for the night?!

pdelae February 16 2012, 04:21:41 UTC

LOL you made me truly laugh out loud... because that IS the most important! I will give it some thought...