Toss Me High and Smile, PG

Oct 31, 2008 23:50

Title: Toss Me High and Smile
Author: dizzydame
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: No warnings or spoilers.
Written For: hariboo_smirks
Prompt: Carolyn Lam/Cameron Mitchell; making it work with their jobs,
established relationship, no angst.
Author's Notes: Thanks to wildaboutharry for the last minute beta. :)

Cameron usually likes... )

pairing: lam/mitchell, 2008 ficathon, recipient: hariboo_smirks, writer: dizzydame, genre: het, series: sg1

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asugar November 3 2008, 15:41:13 UTC
Oh I love this! It's fantastic. I like how she's so much more complicated and difficult and dangerous than he normally wants and despite all or because of all that he can't stay away from her and that the same goes for her. The chemistry, the emotions and little details are pitch perfect. Thanks for sharing. I don't know why there is so little out there about a canon pairing.

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rodlox November 3 2008, 15:57:28 UTC
an excellent story, with the perfect closing line.

I enjoyed their nonverbalness, and the appreciation for the trickiness of their situation.

I'm not normally a Lam/Cam shipper, but this fic makes me into one.

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dizzydame November 4 2008, 02:47:11 UTC
This is my first time writing Lam/Cam, so thanks for the kind words!

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Re: tiny typo nitpick dizzydame November 4 2008, 02:46:08 UTC
Thanks for pointing it out! My poor beta had to do a rush job so I could get this in on time, lol.

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hariboo November 3 2008, 16:50:50 UTC
This was just wonderful and just how I see them being together! Your Cam POV was spot on, and I love your portrayal of Carolyn. Because, yes, I do think she's very self aware and can be distant, not in a bad way per say, just she's very controlled.

I just *loved* this bit: “You,” he grins. “You’re cute.”

She draws herself up to her full height and glares.

Cuz he would and she would. Thank you!

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havocthecat November 3 2008, 16:54:17 UTC
Oh, you wrote fic with Carolyn! How wonderful! I love her, and she never gets enough fic written about her. You gave her relationship with Cameron and the difficult position she's in some realistic treatment, and still kept the story flowing and the romance there.

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dizzydame November 4 2008, 02:45:26 UTC
I was really nervous about writing her, since there's so little background on her - but I'm glad you think I pulled it off decently! Thanks!

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