Comments | sg_rarepairings: Traditional Dress (Teyla/Laura Cadman, R)

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Traditional Dress (Teyla/Laura Cadman, R)

Nov 21, 2007 19:29

Title: Traditional Dress
Author: bluflamingo
Rating: R
Pairing: Laura Cadman/Teyla Emmagan
Warnings: None; pretty much pwp
Spoilers: Runner (set early season 2)
Word Count: 5500
Written For: Backup for dirty-smudgePrompt: Laura/Teyla, Laura in Athosian dress, ear biting, porn. She also asked for no references to Duet and there’s one super-tiny reference (microscopic, ( Read more... )

series: sga, 2007 ficathon, recipient: dirtysmudge, genre: femslash, pairing: cadman/emmagan, writer: bluflamingo

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bluflamingo November 21 2007, 22:56:15 UTC

Thank you :)

havocthecat November 22 2007, 01:48:52 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful! The whole thing is good, and incredibly well put together. I love the trade negotiations, and Laura in Athosian clothing, and, wow, I giggled myself senseless at the rainbow-patterned dildo mention.

bluflamingo November 22 2007, 22:39:26 UTC

Thank you!

I giggled myself senseless at the rainbow-patterned dildo mention.

The whole idea is *really* disturbing - I think Laura now would have laughed herself sick over it, but at the time it totally spoiled the mood and she didn't have the kind of girlfriend she could laugh at.

crimsonwhisper November 26 2007, 06:31:55 UTC

hot. and cute :)

bluflamingo November 26 2007, 20:36:15 UTC

Thank you!

dirty_smudge November 29 2007, 00:39:29 UTC

Wow, this was much more than I hoped for. I love Teyla in dominant mode and Laura being all surprised that Teyla wants her. And I liked the personal touches that you added to my prompts.

And yay Lorne. His friendship with Laura isn't shown often enough in canon or fanfiction.

dirty_smudge November 29 2007, 13:54:18 UTC

Thanks, I'm it was what you wanted.

And yay Lorne. His friendship with Laura isn't shown often enough in canon or fanfiction.

It's turned into a bit of my personal canon for the two of them, that they met at the SGC and bonded over some bizarre off-world experience :)

ryf December 2 2007, 11:37:56 UTC

Oh, this was such an amazing read. The way you wrute the two women and the interactions with Lorne and then the really hot sex and the sweet ending and this sentence really has to end now ;)

Wonderful!

bluflamingo December 3 2007, 10:58:18 UTC

Thank you! I love writing Lorne and Laura together, they sneak in everywhere, but I've never written Laura/Teyla, so it's nice to hear it worked.