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tielan November 21 2007, 19:33:46 UTC
This rocks! I love the way you've peppered the story with anecdotes about Cam's grandmother, Teyla's appreciation of Cam, and the team being possessive, while still retaining Teyla's sense of humour and Cam's good-natured ramble.

Thank you so much.

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beanpot November 21 2007, 19:40:46 UTC

**collapses with relief** I honestly don't know if I can write a Cam fic without his grandmother, but I figured Teyla would appreciate it. These two just *work* for me.

I am thrilled you like it!

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tielan November 21 2007, 19:48:52 UTC
I haven't watched enough recent SG1 to have Cam's tone of voice down quite as well as I'd like, otherwise I'd write more of this pairing.

You done real good!

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rodlox November 21 2007, 19:35:03 UTC
my favorite line: "I find I like you odd"...completely original, and also entirely Teyla.

you're getting me to cheer for this pairing. good job!

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beanpot November 21 2007, 19:41:56 UTC
Hee - I liked that line too. And thanks!

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elinor_godwin November 21 2007, 21:53:50 UTC
That was lovely :) I hadn't read this pairing before, and it worked really well. Beautiful writing!

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beanpot November 22 2007, 00:14:13 UTC
Thank you! Making a pairing that someone hadn't thought about before makes me smile!

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ratcreature November 21 2007, 22:59:00 UTC
Aw, this was very sweet. I liked it.

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beanpot November 22 2007, 00:14:25 UTC
Thank you!

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katcorvi November 22 2007, 03:46:28 UTC
Wow! That was fun and you really made this pairing work. It was very sweet and insightful of both, but my favorite line was Carter's when she shook her head and sighed that "our boys will be boys." So very true.

Great story. As I have no icons of either Teyla or Cam, I shall fall back to Carter.

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beanpot November 24 2007, 01:06:47 UTC
Hee - thanks! I'm sort of drawn to them now as well.

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