The Crystal: written for meeshy

Oct 02, 2007 19:12

Title: The Crystal
Author: Pendaren aka Hoshi_Reed
Summary: Sam discovers a secret about her other self. Plenty of Angst.
Rating: PG-13
Season: SGA Season 4
Spoilers: Unending
Pairing: Sam/Cam
Word Count: 1753
Written For: meeshyPrompt: A glimpse into some of the missing time during "Unending". Oh, and baking ( Read more... )

writer: hoshi_reed, 2007 ficathon, pairing: carter/mitchell, recipient: meeshy, genre: het, series: sg1

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anonymous November 22 2007, 04:40:57 UTC
SOB. That was fabulous. And what a great premise. Beautifully done. (Though where did they keep the kids on the ship? Or was JEM never born?)

~J

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hoshi_reed November 23 2007, 06:22:35 UTC
Never born, at least in my head. The only picture being the fetal image after all.

I left it open as to whether she miscarried or due to the whole situation she chose to abort.

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triplesnap November 22 2007, 15:50:20 UTC
This was just heartbreaking. I love how you worked bits of her past into the codes and the ending...God. There are no words. Great job!

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hoshi_reed November 23 2007, 06:26:56 UTC
Thank you, I usually can't stay away from angst. I actually had the crystal/baby plot bunny in my head for a while but I had tried to write a S/T fic but it wouldn't come. For some reason, when I saw S/C and baking the words just flowed. I think it was because JEM became the perfect initials.

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meeshy November 23 2007, 10:14:44 UTC
Hey :) thanks for writing Sam/Cam unending, it was admittedly the prompt I wanted written the most *G*

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mf_luder_xf December 7 2007, 02:21:16 UTC
Now that was a wonderful twist on the end.

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hoshi_reed December 7 2007, 03:48:02 UTC
Me and Angst, for some reason that muse won't ever let me go

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dragon_within April 1 2008, 19:05:56 UTC
So I'm browsing around, reading old fic that I've never read and came across this gem.

Brilliantly done! I especially love the ending, although when I first read Sam's last message, I thought she meant her father Jacob. His last words (basically) had been for her to find a way to be happy, and this was AU Sam's way of showing our Sam that she'd found that way. Then when I read the next bit "Jacob Elliot Mitchell", the whole sequence held a double meaning for me, and made it that much more poignant. I loved it.

Thank you for sharing this with us!

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