Winter Exchange fic

[evening_shadow]

Title: The Shades Between Them
Author: ladylioness
Recipient: nytel
Challenge: Winter exchange at sg_onesweetlovePrompts: Jen and Ronon's first fight as a couple, pure and utter exhaustion, baking/cooking

Comments

love your story

[joker_01]

hey,
loved it...so Ronon and Jenn..is this a one shot?

[dragongirl76137]

I like it good for Teyla and John setting them up like that

[renisanz]

Wow. This was awesome. I really enjoyed the style of this; it just flowed with so much emotion. You conveyed Jennifer and Ronon's feeling simply, but so well. I like how the story unfolded slowly and as I read, more and more about what happened, what they'd fought about, was revealed. Very clever. Good job. :)

[funkyinfishnet]

Wow, I really like this. There's such rawness to Ronon and Jennifer not wanting to share him with ghosts is really awesome. The ending is perfection, great job :)

[nytel]

This was absolutely fantastic. Seriously. There was a huge amount of detail for a one shot, which is of course awesome. ;) I also like how you didn't reveal what the fight was about until the end. Kept us waiting. *g*

And I think that if Ronon and Jen were to start a relationship, overcoming/accepting his past would definitely be challenge for Ronon. You did a great job of showing that to us.

Thank you for such an awesome fic. :)

[evening_shadow]

You're welcome. I wanted it to be awesome for you, so I'm really glad you liked it!

[nytel]

Well, I definitely loved it, so I'd say you accomplished your goal. :) Thank you again! *hugs*