Waiting for Daniel (PG)

Sep 14, 2009 22:57

Summary: Jack takes a bleak look at seven years of waiting for Daniel, and wonders if he's ever coming back.

Episode tag for Full Circle, with references to Stargate: the Movie and the first six seasons of SG-1. Angst level set rather high. ~1,250 words. Rated PG ( Read more... )

my sg-1 fic

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aelfgyfu_mead September 15 2009, 22:00:04 UTC
Chilling. I'm glad I know what happens next, or I'd be really depressed. And I mean that in the nicest possible way.

(Couple of minor corrections: early on you have "Samuel" for "Samuels" and, near the end "Abydos is glowly" for "Abydos is glowy". Just got off teaching for the day!)

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sg_fignewton September 16 2009, 05:02:22 UTC
I always appreciate your catching of my typos. :)

Yeah, that was a pretty depressing moment for Jack. As you say, we're lucky to know what comes next.

Thanks! :)

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zats_clear September 15 2009, 23:26:21 UTC
that is so very beautiful! thanks for writing it

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sg_fignewton September 16 2009, 05:02:43 UTC
Thank you, Zats! :)

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eilidh17 September 15 2009, 23:32:54 UTC
So very reassuring that Daniel does come back to us. I love your Jack-voice and really, he is so very right in the end - you can't wait forever for someone. A very lovely story.

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sg_fignewton September 16 2009, 05:03:31 UTC
Heh, yes - we know Daniel's coming back, even if Jack doesn't!

Serious Jack-voice is still a struggle for me, so thanks - very glad you liked it. :)

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sg_betty September 16 2009, 05:29:59 UTC
The not knowing must have been grim. We ended up with a 'best case scenario', but it could have been very different. Excellent!

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sg_fignewton September 16 2009, 05:33:44 UTC
::nods:: How easy would it have been for them to miss Daniel on Vis Uban? I always suspected Oma of pulling a few extra strings there. :)

Glad you liked it!

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dieastra September 16 2009, 21:53:24 UTC
That was just lovely! A fast ride through all seven seasons.

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sg_fignewton September 16 2009, 22:11:03 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

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