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Fic: Only Sky Above Us - Team:SGC - Weekly Challenge

May 07, 2007 19:18

Title: Only Sky Above Us

Author: avamclean

Rating: FR13

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters and no profit is being made from them.

Spoilers: BTVS 1-6 and Stargate 1-7 (Jack is still a member of SG-1)

Challenge: #2 Ascension, Death, Rebirth (I managed two out of the three)

Synopsis: Joyce is trying to not let Buffy's death ruin her life, ruin the ( Read more... )

team:sgc, weekly-challenge, jack-pairings

Comments 8

lyl_devil May 7 2007, 23:36:51 UTC

::sniff:: You're making me get all teary. Stop it.

Lovely Joyce piece. Her and Jack just fit so well together. Any chance of a sequel? Cause this is just begging for another installement. *g*

avamclean May 8 2007, 00:52:23 UTC

Joyce deserves some Jack lovin'. She's had a rough time the last year or so.

I'll probably touch on this 'verse again cause I'm hpoing with Joyce as a stable influence Buffy might actually be able to accept her lot.

delibby May 7 2007, 23:48:03 UTC

oh wow

thank you for sharing, this is good And I'll second that request for a continuation.

avamclean May 8 2007, 00:48:04 UTC

There's a possiblity depends on the prompts we get. Thanks for taking the time to review.

kaylashay May 8 2007, 00:35:03 UTC

First, YAY!!! You joined Team SGC!

Second, this was lovely. I can see Jack and Joyce bonding because he would know what losing a child would be like. Having the confusion from Daniel and the others at the end over the "dead Buffy" appearing is nice.

Love it!

A little slip up you might want to fix: Be helpful and get me a bowel. bowl would be better. ;-)
At least you are consistant though: Once the bowel was placed beside the cutting board...

avamclean May 8 2007, 00:47:01 UTC

*grumblegrumble*stupid spell check*grumblegrumble*

Its fixed. Thanks!

rivulet027 May 8 2007, 00:48:37 UTC

Oh wow, that was wonderful. Loved Joyce and Jack's interaction and Dawn learning from Daniel. Could so see it happening. Wonderful imagery.

One question: Would they know his name is Teal'c or would they think it was Murray?

Loved this.

avamclean May 8 2007, 00:54:15 UTC

When the story was from Joyce perspective it would be Murry and from Jack's it would be Teal'c. He may care for Joyce but Jack would still follow orders and the name Teal'c is a little eye brow raising.