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With Twilight Descending by nanda

Dec 04, 2007 12:06

Title: With Twilight Descending
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: S3
Your name: nanda (nandamai)
Your recipient: eve11
Request details: Official SciFi Cliche #786-- "Aliens made them read each others' minds." What happens if the team gets a little too close for comfort? Would they function better? Worse? Take it, run with it, show me something new ;).

With Twilight ( Read more... )

2007, fic, angst

Comments 15

eve11 December 4 2007, 19:42:35 UTC

eeeeee!

*bites nails*

*goes back to working on late submission*

Gonna try and finish what I'm working on before reading. Possibly this involves unmanageable amounts of willpower...

supplyship December 4 2007, 19:49:38 UTC

This is just... beautifully written and so painful to read. That they can't even take the smallest comfort in each other - that all they have to share is pain - brought tears to my eyes. Oh team! I hope you can come back from this one, but I don't know how anyone could!

I love this line that starts with Sam and ends with Daniel: "She fought to suck in air and finally opened her eyes and Daniel saw nothing but an empty room."

Really, really ouchie good.

aurora_novarum December 4 2007, 20:01:21 UTC

Poor team! *sniffle*

Very well written with amazing imagery, but...*pets team*

Great job, nanda. :-)

majorsamfan December 4 2007, 20:46:14 UTC

I was so entranced the whole way through. Admittedly, the "can read each others' minds" thing has been done in other fandoms, like Picard-Crusher in ST:TNG, but IMHO you executed this superbly. I was so THERE.

Well done! (Of course, I've grown to expect nothing less than "superb", "well done" and endless other attributes when reading nanda!fic...)

loriel_eris December 4 2007, 23:14:04 UTC

*jawdrops* When I saw "Dr Jackson" I assumed that it was teh SGC rescuing them. However, the way you ended it? Has convinced me that they did die. *wibbles* Then my sensible side kicks in and says, "But they can't die!"

Very much enjoyed this, even tho I can't make up my mind as to what happened at the end!

PS. A heads up. The 'Link to Comments' at the bottom of the fic on your website takes the reader to your LJ entry for Domestication instead of this post.