Comments | sg1teamficathon: Time Marches Onward, by Settiai

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Time Marches Onward, by Settiai

Nov 17, 2007 22:14

Title: Time Marches Onward
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Set between S8/S9. Spoilers through mid-S9.
Your name: settiai
Your recipient: xfirefly9x
Word Count: ~3100 words
Request details: Trees, Jonas visiting them, and something unexpected.
Notes: Many thanks to rigel_7 for beta'ing.
Summary: For a few months, Earth wasn't number one on the galaxy's hit list.

( Time Marches Onward )

2007, fic

Comments 13

dknightshade December 4 2007, 20:57:02 UTC

Nice. Nice way to fill in the events after Season 8. The quote at the end makes me sad. I didn't catch it in the episode (I tend to mistake Kelowna for the planet's name and forgot that it's really a country).

settiai December 4 2007, 21:59:04 UTC

I'm glad that you liked it. :)

supplyship December 5 2007, 00:28:47 UTC

Aw, Jonas! He, like many great characters on SG, really didn't get the ending he deserved. Thank goodness for fanfic like yours! This was really nice - I liked how they all came together and admitted discussed going their separate ways. That's way family is for!

settiai December 5 2007, 00:29:51 UTC

I'm glad that you liked it. :)

stargazercmc December 5 2007, 01:34:21 UTC

Jonas fic, and teamy goodness. Nice. And ah! That quote. It makes me want them to bring Jonas on for SGA at least once or something so we know he's OK.

settiai December 5 2007, 01:48:39 UTC

I'm glad that you liked the story. :)

And, yes, I wish they'd at least mention Jonas. But I think it's probably too much to hope for.

aurora_novarum December 5 2007, 04:10:17 UTC

Aw, nice introspection for each of the gang. I love Jonas being brought in for no big adventure, but just this quiet moment at the cabin.

They all just seemed to fit. Nice way of making it seem teamy even as they were going their seperate ways (temporarily! dang it).

*sniffle* I hate that castoff line in Counterstrike*sniffle*

settiai December 5 2007, 04:22:44 UTC

I'm glad that you liked the story. :)

sg_fignewton December 6 2007, 07:05:57 UTC

Oh, this was very nice! Transitions and shifts, and no one wanting to disturb the status quo for the sake of the others.

And that quote from Counterstrike...! I've never been much of a Jonas fan (although I quite like him here in the fic!), but it made me so angry that a character that had been part of SG-1 for a year was reduced to a casual aside like that.

settiai December 6 2007, 16:10:17 UTC

I'm glad that you liked the story. :)

And yeah, that casual mention in "Counterstrike" definitely made me a little upset the first time I heard it. Because Daniel was more than just "Daniel's replacement" - he was a member of the team, for awhile at least.

madaboutdanny February 12 2008, 13:27:21 UTC

You know, I've watched season 6 and to me Jonas is been just that, Daniel's replacement, a bad replacement, thanks the authors. Watch Homecoming, the last scene on the ramp, the absolutely expressionless Jack's face toward Jonas, even at the end the authors was not capable to write some nice stuff about him. However, nice story, thanks.