"It's Like Camping, Only Not" by Kellifer_fic

[kellifer_fic]

Title: It's Like Camping, Only Not
Rating/Warning: PG (Language)
Spoilers: None
Wordcount: 3,338
Your name: kellifer_fic
Your recipient: thehallway
Request details: The six of them, Cam, Vala, Sam, Jack, Daniel, Teal'c, in the mountains around Colorado Springs after the Ori take over Earth, trying to organize survivors and regain control of the Mountain.
Notes: Thanks

Comments

[aurora_novarum]

Oh wow. I wondered how there ended up being stashes on the mountain, but of course Vala would come up with such an idea

And I loved the distinctive point of views at different moments in time, with the common threads of Daniel's foot and the twig snapping and the motorcycle magazine to keep us all in context.

I started to think everything would work out (except for poor Daniel's bad leg) and then the end! Eeep! Very scary.

[kellifer_fic]

Thankyou so much!

[skippy_peanuts]

i liked seeing everyone's look at the situation. very interesting.
uh oh daniel. i take it then that perhaps earth did fall completely? :( sad.
really liked the story though. :0)

[kellifer_fic]

Thankyou... :)

wow.

[thehallway]

this is just wonderful. so far beyond anything i'd hoped for.

loved the changing pov, they were all spot on.

and vala as anthropologist? rocked my socks. as did daniel here, and sam, and jack...hell, they were all just freaking perfect.

thank you so much for such a lovely piece.

Re: wow.

[kellifer_fic]

Oh yay! I'm so glad you liked it! You always fret right up until the requestor gives the thumbs up... :)

[stargazercmc]

Oh, Vala. Leave it to you to save everyone's ass by not trusting a good thing to begin with.

Love the alternating ease and tension in this. Nice job.

[kellifer_fic]

Thankyou!

[starrylizard]

Love the different POVs! Poor Daniel! O_O Is he changing back? *confusing-freaky*

[kellifer_fic]

Maaaaybe... :) Thanks for reading.