You know Darryl, you're making me see this episode in a whole different light- and I already liked it so that's saying plenty ;D Vala's reactions were great, I love how flawlessly you have their interactions down. Good job!
heart-ed it.natalia5345December 6 2007, 15:42:12 UTC
*Hugs story* Love it. as usual. did you really expect me to say anything else? really? how bout...what's the next part? :) (gee i'm not predictable at all. but maybe if just point it out it will seem less lame. or maybe if I stop having conversations with myself in LJ replies)
Re: heart-ed it.sg1catDecember 12 2007, 00:02:53 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. It's always nice to see my stories so adored. Thanks very, very much, Nat. :-)
*smiles warmly* the next part should be coming soon, I hope. Things have been a bit stressful lately, but I'm hoping to get back to my writing. (I need the relief!)
Wow! So close to cannon with your own little flare. I'm so incredibly impressed right now *g*
I really like how you've blended Daniel and Vala's reactions from BG with all this extra DV stuff you've added. I've always been really curious as to why Daniel was so irritable in this episode. Particularly with Vala. It all make sense now when reading it from your perspective :D
I think Vala really rang true for me in this chapter. Every piece of reflection or dialogue felt like CB's voice in my ear. So cool.
Favorites:
*The Mitchell/Teal'c dialogue while they go and prepare for the medical personnel to arrive.
The two wordlessly watched Daniel and Vala from afar for a few more moments.
"Kinda lousy timing for them to finally start figuring things out, huh?" he asked wryly, glancing over at the Jaffa. Teal'c smiled slightly at Mitchell's words, meeting his gaze and nodding. *smirk* I could definately see Cam commenting on that
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Me mind a long review? Are you kidding? ;-)sg1catFebruary 20 2008, 23:23:17 UTC
So as you'll read from my reply to your other review, I am not at all bothered by the long review. Of course you're absolutely right, it's what we authors love to get (and I'll try very hard to be as diligent in reviewing your work, which I have no doubt is worthy of the same praise as you give me
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Vala's reactions were great, I love how flawlessly you have their interactions down. Good job!
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I'll be starting on the next chapter shortly. Hopefully I'll get it posted soon. :-)
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Love it. as usual. did you really expect me to say anything else? really?
how bout...what's the next part? :) (gee i'm not predictable at all. but maybe if just point it out it will seem less lame. or maybe if I stop having conversations with myself in LJ replies)
anyways. loved it. want more. the usual ;)
Nat
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*smiles warmly* the next part should be coming soon, I hope. Things have been a bit stressful lately, but I'm hoping to get back to my writing. (I need the relief!)
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I really like how you've blended Daniel and Vala's reactions from BG with all this extra DV stuff you've added. I've always been really curious as to why Daniel was so irritable in this episode. Particularly with Vala. It all make sense now when reading it from your perspective :D
I think Vala really rang true for me in this chapter. Every piece of reflection or dialogue felt like CB's voice in my ear. So cool.
Favorites:
*The Mitchell/Teal'c dialogue while they go and prepare for the medical personnel to arrive.
The two wordlessly watched Daniel and Vala from afar for a few more moments.
"Kinda lousy timing for them to finally start figuring things out, huh?" he asked wryly, glancing over at the Jaffa. Teal'c smiled slightly at Mitchell's words, meeting his gaze and nodding.
*smirk* I could definately see Cam commenting on that ( ... )
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