Five-things Prompt 1.05

Sep 15, 2006 10:07

Five times Jack wished Daniel was a girl.

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green_grrl September 15 2006, 21:04:30 UTC
1. After Hathor's visit. Actually, he'd wished they'd all been girls, but especially Daniel. He'd gotten the worst of it ( ... )

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starglyph September 26 2006, 16:33:22 UTC
Daniel had admitted himself he'd wished he'd been a girl that time. Cool! Now write a gender-bender that jumps from this one!

#5 I adore this one. Daniel-shaped loneliness Oooh, that hurt so good!

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green_grrl October 1 2006, 23:33:10 UTC
Heh! Actually there is a pretty funny gen fic based on Daniel and Sam switching bodies for the sake of a mission to a women-run planet. Durned if I can remember the name/author, though...

yeah, 5 is a kick in the ol' angst. :-(

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starglyph September 26 2006, 16:42:12 UTC
#1 I love the robot idea, I can just see Daniel's look *g*

#5 Didn't expect Kelowna, very original. Totally Jack-think with the 'revenge' thoughts.

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wishfulaces September 27 2006, 03:35:04 UTC
There were platform shoes that went with it.

That is an awesome detail to throw in and totally makes that little bit. :)

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aramley September 21 2006, 14:38:29 UTC
1. Jack wished Daniel was a girl the first time they argued.

Granted, he was an asshole back then. Jack, that was, not Daniel, though back then he'd thought that Daniel was just about the biggest asshole on the planet. Possibly on any planet; hey, they had a Stargate now, there were a lot more possibilities. But he remembered thinking very clearly that arguments with girls were so very much easier to win. All you did was just make some flippant remark about it being that time of the month already, huh? and then anything she said was obviously influenced by her hormones, and you were the winner by default. It would have been so much easier.

He'd actually forgotten about it until he met Carter. After that he tried to forget it again, because really, how much more of an asshole could he possibly have been?

2. Jack wished Daniel was a girl the first time he caught himself staring.

It wasn't on a mission, thank God, because now that would have been inappropriate, but it was in Daniel's office, on base. Jack had stopped by to invite him ( ... )

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starglyph September 26 2006, 16:44:41 UTC
This is fantastic! The last line is perfect Jack. Thanks

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aramley September 28 2006, 19:32:24 UTC
Thank you! I was really worried that line would come over too sappy, so I'm glad it was believable.

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advection October 1 2006, 21:18:59 UTC
Oh, that is such a lovely progression. I love how they build one on the next. So glad you wrote and posted!

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nangi_akki September 25 2006, 21:40:36 UTC
I actually *groaned* when I first saw this prompt. I thought "Jeez - haven't I already read this theme in about 500 Badfics?" - but you managed to turn it into something unexpected. Thank you!
I especially loved number 4:

To know how it felt to pee, to have sex, to have an orgasm ... to see whether military men treated him differently if he came in a different package ... firsthand understanding of how distribution of body mass affected movement, whether fine motor skills felt any different ... at least a month to find out whether or not the whole hormone thing was a crock.

-and would worship you forever if you actually wrote the story where that happened. Please?

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sef1029 September 26 2006, 00:28:27 UTC
He hardly ever used it -- in fact, it kind of freaked him out that he had it at all, since "sexy" was not the word that came to mind when he smiled at himself in the mirror -- but when he did it always worked. Charm was charm, he figured, right? Worth a shot?

"What's wrong with your face?" Daniel said.

Oh, my. I laughed and laughed.

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starglyph September 26 2006, 17:41:22 UTC
#4 I have wanted this story for YEARS!

and made it to oh, man, that's a foreskin LOL *wheeze* LOL

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whimsicalwhims September 27 2006, 22:52:31 UTC
Better late than never, right?

Pairing: Jack/Daniel. Slash
Rating: Written for readers 14 and older.

Five times Jack wishes Daniel's a girl.

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advection October 1 2006, 21:24:07 UTC
Oh, those are so cool. Love the starting point you chose and where you took it in the end (and that you took it all the way to the point of discovery, which I don't see nearly often enough and I'm really craving lately). So there’s no reason why the realization that they can’t should hurt so much is a killer line, really got to me. And the very last line, too, of course, with its extra dark little chill. Terrific.

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whimsicalwhims October 3 2006, 20:00:25 UTC
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing these.

all the way to the point of discovery, which I don't see nearly often enough

Oh, yes. I would love to see some really good long, plotty discovery fic.

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