Day Eight | Echo

Jun 20, 2016 07:26

Adventurer: viyeolent (AO3) 🌟
Prompt #: 3
Title: Echo
Ship(s): Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: R
Trigger(s): Chanyeol-centric, psychopathy, sadism, slight violence and gore, mentions of blood, mutilation, and religion, allusions to rape, suicide
Word count: 16,618
Summary: For Sector 4's researchers, the nymph was simply ECHO the test subject, but for Dr. ( Read more... )

rating: r, day 8, ship: chanyeol/baekhyun, words: 15k+, genre: sf/fantasy

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natsuminara June 20 2016, 11:56:38 UTC
/weeps
Thank you so much for writing the perfect story for my prompt ♡♡♡♡♡
I love it so much; you can't even imagine.
I hope you'll get lots of positive responses from other readers too :") as our genre of fics isn't hugely loved; but for me this was the absolute best!
♡♡♡♡♡

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viyeolent July 3 2016, 16:11:15 UTC
Thanks man. Thank you for prompting it to begin with ♡ I had a LOT of fun tbvh. Like, oh yeah I can finally let loose a little without worrying about the kids loljk.

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inky_starlight June 20 2016, 16:13:47 UTC
Oh.... oh man. I haven't read anything about experiments in a while, so I feel a little sick (although it's because this is so well written and amazing that I -can- feel that!)
I just !!!!!!!!!!! Oh my goodness, I was not expecting that ending! This is so well written and amazing!

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viyeolent July 3 2016, 16:13:12 UTC
Thank you that, despite it being a rather squeamish fic, you actually enjoyed it (lol) ♡

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eterninitys June 20 2016, 16:34:06 UTC
This is simply amazing, beautiful written and need I say that you're so great at describing what the surroundings look like, how a nymph like Baekhyun looks like and it's all so perfect I feel like I'm in the story with them as well. I'm not familiar with this kind of concept but you just make me fall in love more with the way you portray everything and turn them into words ;;;; I love how you play with the dialogues too! They're really amazing although I had a hard time understanding a couple of stuff (pls forgive my English). I especially love Chanbaek interaction in this when Baekhyun just taps the glass and knows what Chanyeol's saying even though they dont literally talk to each other directly ;;; its just beautiful and sad at the same time like i wish baekhyun werent a nymph so that they could be together at the end. I reread this twice!!!!! because its so great and it left me speechless and wanting more because I feel bad for both of them ;-;. But who am i kidding orz what is a happy ending tho :'D I love how Chanyeol is so in ( ... )

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viyeolent July 3 2016, 16:16:49 UTC
Ahhhhh senpai! ♡♡♡

I had to squint a little because you left a long comment and wow it seriously IS a paragraph; that makes me so happy and--now I have feelings ;A; I'm thankful that you enjoyed this somewhat (I wasn't sure how about how people would receive a fic like this;;;) despite it being weird :') Thank you for reading and even rec'ing it, senpai. I really appreciate it.

P.S. When will you stop being cute? ;3;

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jula2332 June 21 2016, 05:11:08 UTC
Hello, I loved your story. You took the story of hybrid and other species farther than I've read it before. I may have misunderstood some parts, but since its a constant rebeginning of the story, the first one with the legend seemed to be nearly one of their many experiment. Or is it simply the nymph back story? The universe, the world you created is really interesting! There's still a lot I would want to know! Like more details on EXO and why pursue such an experiment. More on D.O. role. More on the previous trials of their experiments. But I'm very happy with the story! It was well written and the caption of automatic voice was good. Also Chanyeol's confusion was really geniune it was a of course he would realise to late, that the nymph was more to him than a subject. But why those roles as nymph and human. Were they real at a moment, were are they from? Baekhyun is really a surreal creature. It's a mystery till the end!! Also the scientific words are cool. Thank you for the story :)

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viyeolent July 3 2016, 16:21:45 UTC
Hello~

Although I wasn't able to more properly expound through the fic itself, the legend actually IS ChanBaek's story. :D D.O. actually (still) is the original Chief of Research and merely plays along to Chanyeol's whims (at the expense of his own sanity and patience). Mmm, yes ChanBaek are really human and nymph respectively. Baekhyun is up for debate though. I'm sorry this reply doesn't make that much sense, but if you're interested, I'll make a post to explain the fic one of these days.

Thanks for reading! ♡

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abcdefghiluvyou June 21 2016, 16:53:37 UTC
I think I didn't really get the end 100% and it literally kills me, so PLEASE after reveals if it's okay for you and not too much of a bother would you mind explaining it to me? ;;; I'm pretty sure I got it, but it's a bit vague and I know that this will never ever let me live in peace if I don't get it explained by the author. I'm so sorry for asking this, I really hope it won't be too much of a bother ( ... )

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natsuminara June 21 2016, 17:37:02 UTC
LMAO CEREN
DON'T TELL LIES

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