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kari_hermione February 7 2012, 06:17:59 UTC
This was wonderful bb! You know how much I loved it because we IM'ed through it but still Ray's momma is my momma. *nods*

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sephirothflame February 7 2012, 06:35:01 UTC
I will never not love you liveIM/tweeting something to me as you read it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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unomega February 7 2012, 10:33:19 UTC
I have had a monumentally bad day. And really the only thing that's allowing me to go to sleep with any kind of peace is that I got to read Brad/Ray long!fic. I love the level of detail you paid attention to, never letting it be forgotten that Walt is supposed to be in his seventies or that Ray left behind a lot of worried people. I love love loved it!

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sephirothflame February 9 2012, 08:40:08 UTC
Oh my, I'm sorry to hear you had such a bad day. On the other hand, I'm glad this fic had even a small part in making it better. Thank you for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥

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loubee77 February 7 2012, 11:53:49 UTC
Wow! I wish I was half as good with words as you are so i could comment properly. This was just wonderful. The underlying sadness of it all (poor Walt) really made my chest ache (that's a good thing!).

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sephirothflame February 9 2012, 08:40:49 UTC
Aww, comments always make me happy no matter how simple or complex. Thank you for taking the time to do so and I'm super glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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_steelphoenix_ February 7 2012, 15:02:13 UTC
I just spent the last hour reading this (it's 0400) - and it's so beautifully spare and descriptive at the same time. I love the voices - Ray especially is bang on - and I love that this really does feel like the boys from the mini despite it being such a different premise. It's an interesting premise, too, by the way. I love that Walt is so very shy, Nate is lovely (but snarky, the best kind), and Brad and Ray are both slowly (beautifully) trying to come to terms with what they are feeling and how the separation has changed them.

Excellent stuff.

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sephirothflame February 9 2012, 08:44:41 UTC
Ahh, this makes me happy. I'm super glad you enjoyed it and even happier that you left such a nice comment. ♥

Like I live for AUs, okay? And The 4400 (the show this premise is from) used to give me all the feelings. I just wish I was better at the whole super powers element beyond giving Ray vague emphatic feelings (because I don't like super powers all that much?) But um. I'm still really glad you enjoyed it and I should probably be sleeping instead of answering comments but damn this makes me happy.

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glitterglam13 February 7 2012, 16:48:41 UTC
I really liked this. I loved how much was implicit, told between the silences and the history shared. Wonderful.

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sephirothflame February 9 2012, 08:45:05 UTC
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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