there's nothing here but what's here's mine

[sezzie_dee]

on annotating prufrock (2/2)
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by sezzie_dee
Fandom: Bones
Rating: pg13, probably tending towards a light R.
Summary: “It’s all the things she’s never had and never wished for.” For all the ways it could have gone, there was only ever really a single ending. BB, BS. AU(s). Post-Boneless Bride in the River.

Part one is here.

Comments

[inspirera]

Wow this was amazing... though the order of events and stuff is a tad confusing, maybe a second read will help! I love the way you write, this piece is beautiful :)
♥

[sezzie_dee]

Thank you for reading, I'm glad it wasn't *too* confusing ^^

[bea_tricks]

this is a perfect kind of delicate chaos.

love it. good work. write more. :)

[sezzie_dee]

A neat description of the sort of thing I was aiming for!

Thanks :)

[falulatonks]

I didn't know if I was in the mood for reading a long story, so I decided to give this two minutes - and I was totally hooked. This was fascinating. It took a bit to get accustomed to the non-linear storytelling, but after I got used to it I ended up adoring this. It's really beautifully written, gentle and difficult and in-character, and the way you left gaps in the narrative between things for us to find something else to fit into the spaces later was fresh and somehow managed to make the story work better instead of coming off as a gimmicky sort of thing. And I love how you write dialogue and characterisation. The alternative line the story takes on seems entirely possible and the way you write it, it feels like I've watched pretty much all of this before, on the show.

I enjoyed this thoroughly - in fact I loved it. :D Some very lengthy stories are worth putting aside the time to read, and I don't find them very often these days, so thank you for posting this.

[sezzie_dee]

I was pretty hesitant about posting thinking it might be a little too muddled for most people's tastes - I'm glad it isn't turning people away entirely.

Thanks for sticking with it ;)

[cleaninggirl]

I really enjoyed reading this fic even if my brain was a little lost at times it just took everything in processed it and had a good ol giggle at my reading material choice again *lol* I loved it and think it flowed beautifully very well done and well sewn together. Bravo Well Done =) I exspecially enjoyed reading this as for some twisted reason I feel the need for some B&B with Sully thrown in for a good twist *lol*

[sezzie_dee]

I adore the B/B/S triangle. And a think a small part of my shippery heart will always have a place for Brennan/Sully. I know a lot of people don't like him, but I think they handled their relationship beautifully.

Glad you enjoyed ^^

[sezzie_dee]

Sometimes I miss myself too. But then I don't know where I go again :P

It wasn't til the end when I was writing the notes and trying to describe its non-linear-ness that it hit me that it was pretty much just an episode of Lost. Which actually made me feel better about the whole thing :D