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sezzie_dee

fic

Dec 15, 2004 14:41

title: through the looking glass
rating: pg
genre: angst/drama/au [if only they’d escaped to europe]
tagline: destiny has a dry sense of humour

( When you die, you see your life flash before your eyes. Maybe, you're reliving every moment you could have died happy. )

fic, pretender, pretender fic

Comments 8

blademistress December 15 2004, 08:08:50 UTC

Wow.

It's not fucked up. I like it. A little disjointed, but I read disjointed deliberately so it doesn't bother me.

I think you may have inadvertently displayed a part of Miss Parker's personality - her complete and total lack of ability to be happy, no matter what. I loved the ties with Thomas, Jarod returning, her daughter (YAY NO CATHERINE NAMING!), and her ending up in Oregon. The irony was lovely.

I liked it. I've never seen a Miss Parker goes with her mother and she has Ethan. Her almost wishing for The Centre again was the icing on the cake. Poor girl. Damned if she does, damned if she doesn't.

sezzie_dee December 15 2004, 08:23:30 UTC

Glad you liked... it didn't turn out at all like it was supposed to *sigh*

It started out with her just wishing she had stayed at the Centre and then the Thomas thing came out of nowhere and I was like, "Hmm, why not take it further? Make him DEMOLISH buildings." Then random things happened and it turned out weird.

And Parker is just a listless soul, if you ask me.

*goes off to work on MP/L again*

melanie_anne December 15 2004, 08:45:22 UTC

That was -- Wow. Really intense. I really liked it though. It's very different. Nice take on Parker trying to be happy.

sezzie_dee December 17 2004, 06:19:53 UTC

Thankie :)

O.o shyallyn December 16 2004, 08:06:23 UTC

Dayam.

That is all.

Good job though. A very thoughtful thing to think about. What could have been. And it's not fucked up. It's very good. ^_^

Re: O.o sezzie_dee December 17 2004, 06:21:19 UTC

Dayam - I like it ;)

G74ddy y0u 7!k3d! ^^

*twink* shyallyn December 17 2004, 11:13:48 UTC

! thnk! w!77 f4ngur7 j00! 0k? XD

leni_ba February 17 2005, 04:03:29 UTC

So ignorance wasn't bliss for her, was it? I guess she couldn't really differentiate the good from the bad, not when she oesn't have a Center life to compare them to.

Lovely, really.