Title: Star struck (Part one)
Author: neko here ^^
Pairing: Jaeho/Yunjae, Yoosumin (?), Minsu (?)
Summary: Super star Yunho meets the gorgeous waiter JaeJoong while Changmin ogles at Junsu who’s ignoring Yoochun. Changmin as the manager of Rising Sun café, Junsu the younger brother of JaeJoong and the ex of Yoochun, it’s like a family affair.
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I'VE MISSED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*run off to read now*
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Wow..the Yunjae are already falling in love with each other at first sight..but well, who could blame them? They're like the two different poles that gravitise to each other whenever they meet.
Changmin sounded utterly love struckly cute..can't imagine him running home to change just cause he's meeting Junsu later....oh, Jae you manipulative bastard..bwhaha..you using Junsu, Min's archilles' heel as excuses...bwhaha..but I must say, brilliant move...
Poor Yoochunnie..I wonder what happened between the Yoosu that caused Junsu to leave him???
I look forward to the next part, Neko-chan *mewl*
*huggleschutightbb*
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Haha very nicely said. They are, indeed.
i wanted to portray Changmin in a different way, rather than the usual stoic and whatnot Min. And Jae's well, sneaky ne?
you'll find that out soon enough ^^
*snuggles* aw thank you chloe-chan. ily~
♥
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i missed you too ^^
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thanks for reading and commenting~ ♥
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I missed your stories, too. I missed how they made me feel happy. ^^ Reading them has always managed to convey this certain warm feeling throughout my body. It's like snuggling in the arms of the person you love and never wanting to leave.
Yunho is love. Your characterization of him is so pretty and cute. It makes me want to huggle him. *grins* And your Jaejoong is as adorable as ever. They're both adorable. *gasp* XDDDDD Yoochun sounds cool. Can't wait to find out how Su fits into all of this.
And this line killed me.
"If you don’t want bambi disappearing all of sudden, you will.”
In short, I love it and I can't wait for the next part.
I ♥ you. ^^
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*blushes* aw now you're just flattering me. Maa, i do love your comments~ always makes me feel all nice and snuggly.
Tehehe, i was giggling the whole time i was typing him up (and talking to you) and Jae is just, XDDDDD, hot and adorable shoved in to one person. ^^
haha, i thought bambi needed to make an appearance.
I ♥ you more~
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Can't wait for the update...now I need to get back to washing clothes!
wkjoaoakahsh
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Haha, have fun then~
thank you for reading and commenting♥
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