BFS ENTRY: Lemonade (G; Severus and Lily)

Jan 25, 2010 14:10



Title: Lemonade
Category: One (1- to 10-years-old)
Characters: Severus and Lily
Author: scarletladyy
Beta Reader: pollyandra
Rating: G
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): None.
Word Count: 1602
Summary: When Lily realises it's Severus' birthday, she gets a sticky idea into her head.

Lemonade )

author: scarletladyy, bfs entry

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venturous1 January 26 2010, 04:40:47 UTC
lovely bittersweet story, what a bright light she is for him!

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:35:10 UTC
Thanks :)

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nimrod_9 January 26 2010, 11:46:25 UTC
I like seeing Severus young and your take on Lily and the way/why he's drawn to her.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:35:18 UTC
Thank you :)

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duniazade January 26 2010, 13:31:44 UTC
Already sharing experiments in Potions, are they? ;-)

This was charming in a sweet and sharp way. Lily is cute and yet it's easy to see how she will brew trouble.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:35:30 UTC
He he xD Thanks for reading :)

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unbroken_halo January 26 2010, 22:13:51 UTC
Poor Severus. Interesting look at Lily's home life.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:35:39 UTC
Thank you for reading :)

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angela_snape January 28 2010, 18:30:38 UTC
I bet the lemonade was good - too bad Severus didn't get a chance to taste it.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:35:52 UTC
*nods* Thanks for reading :)

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