Live Free or Die Hard Fanfic: "Cracking the Code"

May 10, 2014 07:13

Title: Cracking the Code
Fandom: Live Free or Die Hard
Characters: John/Matt
Rating: Mature
Word Count: 2391
Summary: A month ago it was coded tracking numbers on their grocery receipts; the month before that, low-grade tranquilizers implanted in chicken breasts to keep people numb and complacent. It really shouldn't surprise him that the crisis ( Read more... )

fanfic: live free or die hard, comm: smallfandomflsh

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tinnean May 10 2014, 12:13:15 UTC
Y'know, if we have to have a zombie apocalypse, I want John McClane on my side. (Look how fast he picked up on shooting the walkers in the head) And Matt too, because he'd know what to do.

While I was reading this, I kept wondering what would happen if they went south to Georgia after they got Lucy, who of course would be kicking zombie ass. Or if Rick, Daryl, and the rest of their team wound up in New Jersey. ;-)

You write the best apocalypse stories! Thanks so much for this.

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severina2001 May 16 2014, 12:41:21 UTC
I just LOVE that you referred to the zombies as walkers!!! I have to admit, I made sure not to use the word 'zombie' because part of me is also wondering what might happen if John and Matt decide to head south. I already know what would potentially happen in the next part of the story. LOL Damn these zombieverses are addictive!

Thank you SO much!

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msofdarkness May 10 2014, 13:34:10 UTC
Yay! More please?

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severina2001 May 16 2014, 12:43:43 UTC
I *do* know what would potentially happen in the next part of the story. Maybe I'll try to do a smallfandomflsh series, if the next prompt cooperates. :)

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adafrog May 11 2014, 02:40:41 UTC
Very good.

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severina2001 May 16 2014, 12:46:09 UTC
Thanks!

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persnickett May 11 2014, 13:13:39 UTC
Heeeeeeeeeee 'the usual'!

What I love about this is this is so totally what would happen. This is so totally why these two would survive. Matt would be onto this thing way before it made its way to their door and John would be READY. Because he's John. :)

As always you remember to put such interest and detail in, like the nightgown and the lilacs. Painting a picture that is more than just the bare bones of what the story needs for us to get it, and making us *feel* it instead. And you do it like falling off a log which kills me. Awesome!

PS....hmm. Georgia eh?

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severina2001 May 16 2014, 12:57:23 UTC
Matt would TOTALLY be on it. I pictured him with a big map and thumbtacks representing possible infection sites, and checking every online version of the daily paper in every little town. I should have added a Matt POV section. Damnit.

and making us *feel* it instead. And you do it like falling off a log which kills me.

Awww, thank you. It's a hell of a lot easier for me with apocalypse stories. :)

PS....hmm. Georgia eh?

I did deliberately not use the word 'zombie'... just in case there's a sequel. ;)

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minttown1 May 12 2014, 21:59:23 UTC
This is so good! I love how you write these two.

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severina2001 May 16 2014, 12:59:00 UTC
Thank you so much!

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