Title: The Art of Love and Cooking
Author:
sevenswells My betas. I love them:
drgaellon and
guilshad Rating: This chapter will be NC-17! Holla~! Only this part is still R-ish
Fandom/Pairing: Glee, Puck/Kurt
Warnings/Spoilers: Food porn, and then some actual porn after that. No spoilers because it's an AU in which glee club didn't happen.
Comments: PLEASE DON'T KILL ME.
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Anyway, this was lovely! I loved how Puck and Kurt just get along with each other (then of course Gill putting her foot it. I very nearly actually facepalmed). I also love the way you're portraying Kurt's increasing frustration with Aurelien, and I can't help but think "Why on earth did you ask to marry him in the first place?!"
Simply cannot wait for the next part! Love it!
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Hahaha, in all honesty, that's exactly the kind of reaction I was hoping for =D Since there was such a gap in time between the two chapters, I had to start off kind of violently, to shake and confuse the reader a bit, so I'm really glad to see I succeeded! ^^
Simply cannot wait for the next part! Love it!
Thanks, darling! Although I have to warn you, next part will be up around the 10th of March, not before, unfortunately.
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YAAAAAYYY!!! =D NGL, this is my real goal with this fic! ^^
And when Gill refused a beer I even wondered if she was pregnant.
Dude. You're really, really good at this *____* I don't think I ever had a reader as sharp as you before! You amaze me, seriously.
I need to come right out and say it, though, next parts (I'll post both of them in a row) will be up around the 10th of March, but not before, unfortunately.
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A good writer drops clues that foreshadow critical plot points, I'm only doing my half of the job :3
I'm looking forward to Mid-March! I started back at uni this week, so it will give me something really pleasurable to look forward again.
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Good luck for uni, and yes, see you mid-march, dear! ^^
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That said? I went to click on the mix, and Youtube said I do not own the playlist. Are the sharing settings correct?
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Re: the mix -- I think it was a URL problem; now it should work. Please let me know if it still doesn't!
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I enjoyed the revelation that Puck was bullied verbally by his French classmates about his American roots. It makes sense that it will happen and I also think it adds to who Puck has become by having him be in the position to fight his way towards what he wants. I also really enjoy the underlying chemistry between Puck and Kurt, because while it's there it's still surprisingly not overwhelming and all we focus on (though it's not a bad thing to focus on, it just allows us to be able to focus on the food and other aspects of the fic.)
Can't wait for the next part!
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I also really enjoy the underlying chemistry between Puck and Kurt,
I must say, I left this fic aside for a long time, but when I got around to writing it again, it was SO EASY to make Puck and Kurt's conversations work. They just click, and it takes almost no effort on my part.
I don't understand the writers of Glee, the chemistry between those two characters is just THERE, and it's left completely unexploited. Why would they obstinately refuse such delicious potential? I mean, they don't even work the friendship angle! Augh! It leaves me SO frustrated!
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