This was so great! I am so glad I decided to check your journal to see if you might have posted something. Even if you don't do the sequel crossover with HP, this story seems like it is going to be wonderful all by itself. I really enjoy Spike/Dawn stories even if there aren't that many of them. Can't wait for the next update! Katie
wow...I like this. I love that you are portraying spike as the monster he really is. I never really believed that he had changed inside. I always felt that the chip was just holding him back.
That last chapter was really powerful. I love that you compared Spike's obsession with Dawn to Angelus's obsession with Drew. I love that he is such a perverted monster. Good work. I'm on to chap 2.
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That last chapter was really powerful. I love that you compared Spike's obsession with Dawn to Angelus's obsession with Drew. I love that he is such a perverted monster. Good work. I'm on to chap 2.
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