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Sep 07, 2006 07:48

Title: Chapter 8
Series: Lost
Author: Sevangel
Disclaimer: Not mine
Rating: PG-13

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im_a_leaf September 7 2006, 12:26:55 UTC
What another great chapter!! And I'm so glad Kaylee saw the light! This is the best way to start my mornings!

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anonymous September 7 2006, 14:22:49 UTC
Lovely chapter! Great interactions between Jayne and River, and it was priceless when Inara told off the men! Thanks for the update, and I can't wait to read more! :)

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anonymous September 7 2006, 15:28:43 UTC
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Well, all of your stuff is... But I love the interactions between Jayne and River, they're so sweet. Inara and Zoe totally rock!! I loved Inara telling the men off in the mess, and then that last line. I loved it, I could totally see her saying that; just the right amount of sarcasm and eye-rolling!! Loved it, please update again soon. On all your stories, I'm in love with them all!!

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just_unravel September 7 2006, 17:00:26 UTC
At least Mal and Simon are kinda getting the stick out of their respective pi gus, though rather slowly. I am enjoying where this story is going and am excited to see how it ends. But I'm with Jayne and River--I want them back on the island. =)

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wrenn_8811 September 7 2006, 18:26:42 UTC
Your writing should be outlawed it is so excellent, it is criminal.

You made me cry, I loved it so

More please

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