Lovely chapter! Great interactions between Jayne and River, and it was priceless when Inara told off the men! Thanks for the update, and I can't wait to read more! :)
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Well, all of your stuff is... But I love the interactions between Jayne and River, they're so sweet. Inara and Zoe totally rock!! I loved Inara telling the men off in the mess, and then that last line. I loved it, I could totally see her saying that; just the right amount of sarcasm and eye-rolling!! Loved it, please update again soon. On all your stories, I'm in love with them all!!
At least Mal and Simon are kinda getting the stick out of their respective pi gus, though rather slowly. I am enjoying where this story is going and am excited to see how it ends. But I'm with Jayne and River--I want them back on the island. =)
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You made me cry, I loved it so
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