The Halfling - Part 13

[seutae_yah]

Title: The Halfling
Pairing(s): Onkey, side 2min
Rating: PG-13 (overall)
Genre: Romance, sci-fi (?)
Disclaimer: I don't own SHINee, I don't own any of the members. Their souls and bodies belong to SM, I am only a lowly, foreign fanfic writer.

Comments

[anonymous]

I love this chapter so much, so worth the wait. I love how you have shown Onew's growing feelings for Key and when you wrote in Key going to hold Onew's hand I squealed. So many feels, can't wait for the next part ^_^

[seutae_yah]

thank you so much ^^ i really appreciate you reading <33 it means the world!

[samanddeanfan1]

I can see why you think it feels rushed because there are so many scenes in this one update but it reads fine. It seems like it should become easier to write now hat you have the background out of the way.

I love Onew being so concerned for Key, there are threats on so many levels.

It was nice seeing how they seem to be settling in to their life. I loved that Key got to go outside and got a place to put all of his creams. Poor Onew having to go to work with his dad - oh the times when we did what was expected of us and followed in our parents shoes.

[seutae_yah]

im so glad you liked it! i definitely wanted to show them settling into their lives together, but i was glad to bring them back into the outside world. as its a very real thing (and threat)! thanks so much for reading :) <33

[anonymous]

"Onew became finely tuned to every twitch and tick the other had, an expert on what every glint in Key’s eye meant and a downright scholar on the finer points of why the blonde’s face could start a war, or why his smile could inspire world peace." GOSH STOP THIS RIGHT NOW, I CAN'T TAKE IT >.< Jinki in love is so freakin precious <3 <3 Kibum Sex/Beauty GOD T.T
This was really good, I loved all the details about Jinki being infatuated with Kibum, and it is getting really interesting with them both now dealing with the outside world. I can't wait to see how this will develop, I have a feeling Dongwan might lay hand on Kibum, let me just kill myself or something T.T
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE,, FIGHTING ~~

[seutae_yah]

im really glad you like that quote! i think it's my favorite of the whole part ^^ and, tbh, dongwan sucks and he will continue to suck. i'm sorry for that in advance :(

thanks so much for reading i really appreciate it :)

[ext_2354908]

*silently sobs*
I love this fic so much and every time it is updated I dread the end of the chapter. I wish it could just go on and on~ I would surely love it if writing would go easier from now on =3 This chapter was great though. And that last scene just.... Ugwaaaaaaaah! *vibrates on seat* *spins on chair* *flips desk*
It's just so... so...
*faints*

[seutae_yah]

LOL ahh i hope that's a good reaction to the last scene? are you okay? do you need help? lol
thanks so much ^^ <3

[anonymous]

nvjfdnbjgnjkf i'm so happy to see an update from you <3 I love that we kind of got a step back to see Jinki's feelings grow over a longer period of time. Also can I say that key is absolutely adorable and gorgeous and I love him. I have a bad feeling about Dongwan though, he gives me the creeps ;; I hope that jinki and key can stay away from him ;A; but this was a really good update, thank you <3

[seutae_yah]

dongwan definitely sucks and im sorry for that. he'll continue to be in the story, too, so... brace yourself. lol thanks so much for reading!! <3