The Halfling - Part 12

[seutae_yah]

Title: The Halfling
Pairing(s): Onkey, side 2min
Rating: PG-13 (overall)
Genre: Romance, sci-fi (?)
Disclaimer: I don't own SHINee, I don't own any of the members. Their souls and bodies belong to SM, I am only a lowly, foreign fanfic writer.

Comments

[samanddeanfan1]

Oh, I am so excited that you updated... But it is really late so I will have to wait to read it tomorrow when I can read slowly and enjoy every twist & turn.

I will have great dreams trying to imagine where these two will go in this update. :-)

Updated:
Ok, I am so glad I got some sleep before reading this because I don't think I would have been able to fall asleep after reading this.... So good, another emotional rollercoaster ride.

I love how Onew is all we have to just play it calm when talking to dad then not even 10 minutes in he is the one blowing up and telling his father off. Key is so cute when he tries to calm him down and thanks him for defending Key to Onew's dad.

I love how the friend is all yeah, we know you love him get on with the good part and then is totally surprised by what Onew did. I think Onew was surprised too. I hope the dad doesn't retaliate. That would be so sad & maddening. Oh, Onew, you are so wrong about Key not loving you!

[seutae_yah]

thanks so much for reading!!!

yeah onew is all trying to be chill but he has SO MANY NEW FEELINGS he doesn't know what to do and explodes. exploding onew is fun. he was a bit too controlled before if you ask me.

lmao jonghyun is not impressed. youre absolutely right - onew WAS surprised too. he really did think he'd pretend to agree with his father, business as usual. it's amazing what love makes people do. ^^ poor onew is so unconfident! things will be progressing a bit quicker from here on out, though.

i really hope you like where i take the storyy<333 and thanks a million more times for reading! ^^v

[kpopforlife]

I just made the grossest noise omg. Literally screamed at work when I saw this. Excuse me while I throw metophorical glitter at you for pretty much making my day. Jinki has a backbone - what? Approve. Approve so hard...

[seutae_yah]

i'm so happy i could make your day! i love jinki with a backbone. jinki with a backbone gets shit done. and is kind of hot. i mean what

thanks for reading :)

[anonymous]

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Okay so I started squealing/flailing when I saw that you'd updated and ofc you never disappoint. I'm so glad Onew finally admits his feelings at least to someone! I wish his parents werent so mean though :c Key is so adorable and sweet nfjkbgk and I love how he's gradually opening up more and more. You have a really nice pacing in this story, it's very believable. I'm so happy to see an update from you again I cant tell you how excited I am to see this story continued, it's one of my favorites! <3

[seutae_yah]

you don't need to worry about this story! i know sometimes i take reeaallyyy long breaks but i definitely know where i want the story to go. so i'll keep writing and eventually finish it. i hope you like where the story goes from here... it should be pretty interesting.

thanks so much for reading!! <3

[huniemun]

Omg you updated *tears of joy*

This chapter is so sad. Poor Onew, though I knew his father was not a good person, couldn't believe his father was that cruel to his own son. And his mother didn't help him at all. He should be loved by parents, like Key said.

And Onew finally admitted his feeling but how could he think Key didn't love him? Just confess already.

Hope you will update soon, and I also hope we get some good news and romantic scenes next part :)

[seutae_yah]

yeah, onews parents suck. someone asked me once if i'd give background on them but honestly, they just suck. his dad is cruel and his mom is a product of her upbringing. i think sometimes people just arent good people. no sob story. and that's what i wanted onews parents (mostly his dad) to be.

the story will start progressing more from here. i hope you like it. thanks so much for reading it means the world <3

[ext_2354908]

I'm happy cuz you've updated.. but stil anxious for the rest XD
I just wanna... smash his dad's head in!
Crap, that wasn't what I meant to say... but the sentiment still stands!
But I also just wanna have Onkey sit together and stare at each other with sparkly eyes and be all gooey and fluffy and purrrrr~
Jup
Jup
Jup
Looking forward to the rest~

[seutae_yah]

lmao. yes beat up the duke! and i promise the romance will come. im just building to it. but it will come quicker now! <33 thanks so much for reading

[ext_2354908]

Of course. It would be odd if they were to suddenly jump into it. The tension drives me crazy and I love you for that :P