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seutae_yah

The Halfling - Part 10

Sep 21, 2013 01:03

Title: The Halfling
Pairing(s): Onkey, side 2min
Rating: PG-13 (overall)
Genre: Romance, sci-fi (?)
Disclaimer: I don't own SHINee, I don't own any of the members. Their souls and bodies belong to SM, I am only a lowly, foreign fanfic writer.

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onkey, fic, halfling, pg13, shinee

Comments 5

samanddeanfan1 September 21 2013, 10:46:27 UTC

That was definitely worth reading... So cute! They needed some fluff.

I loved his 1st time seeing snow. It is nice to see Key's experiences through Onew's eyes.

I loved the sections about showering. Ofcourse he had never showered you silly Onew. 1st did you give him permission? 2nd did he know how?

Oh, Onew! Call a dr. Quick! You don't know how fast they can get sick.

seutae_yah September 22 2013, 00:39:30 UTC

thanks so much for reading. ^^ i love fluff omg
i'm hoping i'll have the next part up soon!!

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seutae_yah September 24 2013, 03:49:02 UTC

ow wow thank you so much!! ^^
lmao it's ok you're not the only one worried about his cough! but you'll find out soon enough because i plan on updating very soon. like.. really soon!!! like hopefully tomorrow (maybe even tonight but idk because i'm pretty wiped).
thank you so much for reading! onkey fluff is my heart <3

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seutae_yah September 25 2013, 23:05:10 UTC

thanks a bunch ^^ im sorry i didnt get to update today i ended up being pretty busy. but i promise as soon as i can i'll update! :)

oldroadtoavalon November 10 2013, 13:17:39 UTC

"There was no wind and flakes were falling gently but steadily; a perfect first introduction to snow." - My first time seeing snow was very, very windy and I got my cheeks wind-burnt. I didn't know that was possible and I couldn't feel my face all that well to know it was happening, but I was so happy I probably wouldn't notice it anyway iudwejufihj But I'm glad Key's gonna be able to smile without any sort of pain XD

"He wasn’t quite so sure what exactly they were laughing at but something about the way Key sounded, not the tinkling of bells he had imagined but rather a hurricane of noisy delight, made him indescribably happy." <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

“I want you to understand something, Key.”
“Yes, my lord?”
“I’m not at all angry with you, okay? I’m upset because of the way you’ve been treated.” - this is SO important. I want to write pages and pages on why I love this so much. Firstly because of what I said in my last comment, Key's slave mentality--as good as Onew has been to Key, his first instinct is to blame himself, to chastise ( ... )